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10 Sep 2017 | Target Mains | Question 11

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  • Q.11) Explain the following in the context of a Civil Servant. (100*4=400 words) (5*4=20 Marks)

     

    (a) Self control

    (b) Conscientiousness

    (c) Trustworthiness

    (d) Non-partisanship

     


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  •  Siddhesh Sardal @siddheshsardal

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  •  Vishal Kalal @vishalkalal

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    •  Pritam Kumar @pritam_cd

      -Self control – The essence mentioned is wrong…Ideas in the example is good but the way it has been interpreted shows poor hold on words and sentences manipulation…
      -Trustworthiness – there is no meaning or essence mentioned here…poor example…
      -Incomplete answer…
      Suggestion: Conceptual clarity needed…
      Refer some of the best answers from this section or our model answers for better clarity…

  •  Vk Kumar @vkkumar

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      -(a) Try bringing more clarity in explaining the points…Ethical elements should have to be in explanation…like self control means controling oneself, in particular one’s emotions and desires, especially in difficult situations…rest example mentioned are good…

      -(b) the essence of conscientiousness is wrongly interpreted…Its a personality trait characterized by organization, purposeful action, self-discipline, and a drive to achieve. It makes a person careful and vigilant…etc…

      (c) Good points…explanation could have been much better…like…It is the ability to be relied on as honest or truthful. It is the quality of a person or a thing that inspires reliability.

      -(d) Need to be more specific in explanation…your explanation brings poor meaning…the example mentioned are good…

      In such type of answer…first we need to mention the meaning of the phrase and then by example we need to prove the meaning. Though we cannot recall the exact meaning…we can bring its essence and prove with the help of examples…
      However, your effort is good…can be improved further…keep practicing…
      Marks awarded: (a) 3.5
      (b) 1.5
      (c) 3.5
      (d) 3

  •  Parvathy @parvathy2490

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    •  Pritam Kumar @pritam_cd

      -(a) Self Control – Very well explained…good to quote Daniel Goleman…Also bring example of civil servants to support your points…cut short the explanation of managing self and managing emotions…
      -(b) Conscientiousness – meaning is wrongly interpreted…Conscientiousness is a personality trait characterized by organization, purposeful action, self-discipline, and a drive to achieve. According to many experts, conscientiousness is one key dimension of personality (the others being openness to experience, extraversion, agreeableness, and neuroticism).

      -(c) Trustworthiness – you are suggesting the way to improve trust…we need the explain the meaning of the phrase and bring suitable example to prove our points…if possible quote some thinkers…

      -(d) Non-partisanship – poor way of interpreting the meaning…its simply means being neutral in all circumstances…
      content wise the answer is poor…only the first phrase has been explained well rest are not properly mentioned as per the demand of the question…

      Refer some of the best answers from this section or our model answer for better clarity…

    •  Parvathy @parvathy2490

      oops. Spoiled it totally. Sorry will be careful from next time onwards

  •  Kunal Aggarwal @kunalaggarwal

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    •  Pritam Kumar @pritam_cd

      -Self control – essence explained is good…need to be more specific in examples…
      -Conscientiousness – explained in general way…Conscientiousness is the personality trait of being careful, or vigilant. Conscientiousness implies a desire to do a task well. Conscientious people are efficient and organized as opposed to easy-going and disorderly.
      -Trustworthiness – well explained…good example…
      -Non partisanship – well explained…good example…
      well written…keep it up…
      Marks awarded: (a) 3
      (b) 2
      (c) 3.5
      (d) 3.5

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