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12 Aug 2017 | GS 1 | Why Commercial fishing industry of the world concentrated around North America, Europe, Norway & Japan only? What are the geographical factors affecting it?

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  • World Geography: GS Paper 1

    Q.1) Why Commercial fishing industry of the world concentrated around North America, Europe, Norway & Japan only? What are the geographical factors affecting it?


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  •  Kunal Aggarwal @kunalaggarwal

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    •  RK Sahoo @ramakant-sahoo

      OFFICIAL CD REVIEW:
      – Good introduction and structured answer…good points…and diagram also enhances the presentation of your answer..
      – Other than geographical factors, commercial fishing also depends on other factors like technology, cultural factors etc which could have been mentioned.
      – Good conclusion…
      Marks Allocated: 5/10

    •  king james @king-james

      Hi, where can we find official answers? I cannot find them anywhere.

    •  RK Sahoo @ramakant-sahoo

      official answer to today’s question will be uploaded tomorrow..

  •  Prathibha @prathibhatalwar25

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      OFFICIAL CD REVIEW:
      – a content enriched answer…good points and you have addressed the demands of the question…a diagram of the fishing grounds should have been there..
      – Way forward is not required for this question..work on structuring and better flow of the answer and presentation…
      – otherwise, good answer…
      Marks Allocated: 4.5/10

  •  Avancha Anil @avanchaanil04

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  •  Parvathy @parvathy2490

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    •  RK Sahoo @ramakant-sahoo

      OFFICIAL CD REVIEW:
      – GOOD INTRO..presentation with examples and a diagram…
      – the second half of the question i.e geographical factors needed more elaboration…you have just mentioned as concluding lines..Content is good butter better structuring of answer needed..
      – very good attempt…keep writing!
      Marks allocated: 4.5/10

  •  arjun choudhary @arjun-choudhary1

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    •  RK Sahoo @ramakant-sahoo

      OFFICIAL CD REVIEW:
      – Well structured and content enriched answer..keep it up…Intro could have been better…
      -Work on your lang and map skills…draw the whole world map…highlighting the regions..(this will enhance and maximize your marks)
      – Otherwise, good answer! Well written as per demands of the question.
      Marks Allocated: 5.5/10

    •  arjun choudhary @arjun-choudhary1

      thankyou sir. will improve further.

  •  LLJ @l-lj

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      OFFICIAL CD REVIEW:
      – Good intro and well structured answer…..content and usage of geographical terms is impressive in first half…
      – You have digressed in the 2nd part …geographical factors holistically has not been covered..too much focus on ocean currents and whale migration is out of context…use the same space could have been for diverse geo factors…
      – a diagram of the the world map could have been included…
      – good attempt…you have potential to improve further..
      Marks Allocated: 4.5/10

  •  Anudeep @anudeepnairm

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      OFFICIAL CD REVIEW:
      – Well written answer…very good points…impressive content..
      – you lose out on structure and flow…lack of logical arrangement of ideas..geographical factors was 2nd part of the question..
      – intro could have mentioned names of fishing grounds of the regions…conclusion per se not required for this question…no need to breach word limit for that sake…diagram was innovative….world map could have been better…
      – very good attempt otherwise..keep it up …work on flow and structure..
      marks Allocated: 5/10

    •  Anudeep @anudeepnairm

      Thankyou sir

  •  Vk Kumar @vkkumar

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      OFFICIAL CD REVIEW:
      – Good introduction but can be concised a bit more…points are good…lacks logical arrangement of ideas…could have been structured better…
      -examples of fishing grounds could have been made…map of the other regions could have been there..
      – Improved attempt…good answer overall…work on structure and presentation..
      Marks Allocated: 5/10

    •  Vk Kumar @vkkumar

      Thankyou sir. Will keep improving.

  •  Purushotam Kumar @puru2220

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      OFFICIAL CD REVIEW:
      – few good points….other geographic and other cultural, technological factors missing…
      answer lacks structure and flow…abrupt end to answer…
      – a diagram drawn is noteworthy..keep it up….work on introduction..examples of fishing grounds could have been made…
      – Keep writing…
      Marks Allocated: 4/10

  •  Khemchand Gujjar @khemchand-gujjar

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      OFFICIAL CD REVIEW:
      – INTRO could include names of famous fishing grounds new found land, doggerbank in those locations…
      – capital and technology are not geographical factors…logical flow missing…align your ideas well..avoid long explanation of each factor…just a few lines …be more multi dimensional in approach…
      – include world map in such questions showing ocean currents and locations…enhances your answer manifold…
      – Marks Allocated: 4/10

  •  Vishal Kalal @vishalkalal

    Hello Team CD, I am new to the website but not to the UPSC…. Could you please help me out in finding the model answers to all the questions.
    Thank you

    •  Arushi Pathak @arushi

      Model answers are posted next day on a forum post. Please check there.

    •  Vishal Kalal @vishalkalal

      Thank You!!

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