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12 Nov 2017 | Target Mains | Question 2

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  •  Narayana Sarma @narayanacbe

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    •  Pritam Kumar @pritam_cd

      -Good introduction…
      -Ideas mentioned under threats are good…well arranged…
      -The possible measures are also good…
      However, try incorporating some government schemes in this regard which will show your linkages with current updates as well as ability to mould…
      Good attempt…keep practicing…
      Marks awarded: 5/10

    •  Narayana Sarma @narayanacbe

      Sure @pritam_cd sir. Thanks for allocating your precious time to review our answers.

  •  mahi meher @tanujaparween7

    Plz review…ur guidance help me alot

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    •  India @india-i-am

      gud attmpt.. But u shuld write the future prospect of the cyber attack also..
      write conclusion..

    •  mahi meher @tanujaparween7

      Thank…u…
      So much….

    •  Pritam Kumar @pritam_cd

      Mahi Meher…fonts are too short and takes time to comprehend…try writing in UPSC format answer sheet with proper margin and indent…
      -Introduction is okay…however, we don’t need to incorporate type rather potential threats….like stealing data, blackmailing, embarrassment, weakness revealing, national security problems etc…bring some example like wannacry, petya etc…
      -Budgetary allocation for cyber protection and not attack…use words carefully…
      -Conclusion could have been more comprehensive…inclusion of government steps here is a good idea…way forward is good…but bring essense of your points here…

      however, your effort is good…and this attempt is a better one from previous answers…good going…keep it up…keep practicing….
      Marks awarded: 4.5/10

    •  mahi meher @tanujaparween7

      Thank…u…
      So much sir….
      For reviewing..as well as…for…model answer..

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