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15 Oct 2017 | Target Mains | Question 7

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  •  Narayana Sarma @narayanacbe

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    •  Pritam Kumar @pritam_cd

      -Introduction is good…try incorporating more explanation in intro…though ideas are good…
      -Points mentioned in the areas of benefits are good…Try incorporating more points in challenges…like…addressing design in order to create a wow experience for their customers, implementing the actions on the ground, skilling people, changing in the mindset of the people etc…
      -However, points mentioned by you are also good…try to add some more points…
      Good approach…keep practicing…
      Marks awarded: 5/10

    •  mahi meher @tanujaparween7

      Thank..u so much sir…

    •  Narayana Sarma @narayanacbe

      Thanks for the review @pritam_cd sir. Points noted.

  •  Parvathy @parvathy2490

    Unlike the previous Industrial Revolutions, the fourth Industrial Revolution embraces new technologies that are fusing physical, digital and biological worlds, impacting all disciplines, economies and industries. Digital industrialisation includes use of digital technologies along with physical infrastructure.

    Benefits of Digital Industrialisation:
    1. A significant economic resource: emergence of new factors of production, capital and labour in the form of Artificial Intelligence, as claimed by Accenture.
    2. Worldwide reach: any organisation will be able to function anywhere, without inhibitions. Example:
    a. Uber-global trasport
    b. Monsanto- agriculture
    3. Targeted service delivery, efficiency and a cut on organisational expenses.

    India is one of the largest user of e-commerce and is almost ready for taking the challenge of taking updigital industrial complex. There have been various government schemes emphasising on an increasing use of digital, such as:
    1. NatGrid: for national security
    2. BharatNet: providing internet connectivity to rural areas
    3. Development of software SEZs
    4. Exploration of rare earth metals
    5. Development of human capital: PM-Disha

    There have been challenges which india faces at present like:
    1. Cyber attacks such as WannaCry, which hamper public trust on digital penetration of intelligence.
    2. A pertinent threat to individual privacy.
    3. A contestation on Intellectual Property with other countries.

    While the growing digitization will bring efficient and transparent governance, careful policy implementation to regulate data going out of country and encourage indigenious players to research and develop inhouse capabilities are also required simultaneously.

    •  Pritam Kumar @pritam_cd

      -Introduction is specifying about digital industrialization…we need to be general…here we need to explain about digitalization and its necessities…or in short about its various applications which should be explained further in subsequent para…
      -The benefits mentioned are of narrow interpretation…we need to mention various field of application with their benefits…
      -Your answer is different from what the question aspires…
      Refer some of the best answers from this section or our model answer for better clarity…

    •  Parvathy @parvathy2490

      Thank You Prit Sir

  •  Shefali garg @shefaligarg014

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      -Introduction is okay…
      -Points are good…
      -Conclusion is okay…
      -However we also need to mention about possible concerns (challenges) for India towards digitalization…
      Though your effort is good…more improvement is possible…keep practicing…
      Marks awarded: 4/10

  •  RAHUL JAIN @rahul-jain1

    KINDLY REVIEW 🙂
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    The digital wave is pervasive all over the world and has redefined the societal life in various ways. This is more pertinent in the Indian context which is already an IT powerhouse and also provides a greenfield for digital technology in governance and development.
    The various areas wherein India can take advantages:
    1. In Agriculture, wherein it can boost up the resource quality and also the productivity- thus ensuring food security of the nation.(e.g. M-KISAN, Soil Health Card etc.)
    2. In banking and finance, wherein it can boost up financial inclusion, thus ensuring development of the deprived and poor(e.g. DBT , M-Banking, JAM etc.)
    3. In education too, it can fill the gap left by the ineffeciencies of the physical infrastructure(e.g. e-BASTA,SWAYAM etc.)
    4. In healthcare- by improving linkages between different levels of healthcare systems, improving access to healthcare etc.
    5. Faster clearances, better and informed decision making, simplification of laws,responsive and participative govt etc. are some of the benefits in governance(e.g. PRAGATI, Twitter-Seva etc.)
    However there are some concerns as well:-
    1. Low level of digital literacy among people.
    2. Inadequate connectivity infrastructure.
    3. Reluctance of officials to adopt digital mechanisms(esp at lower levels)
    4. Finally, inherent concerns of security, privacy, data abuse etc. are also present.
    Though the govt has taken steps like Digital Saksharta Abhiyan, National Cyber Security Policy revamp, BharatNet,NOFN etc. it is imperative that they be undertaken with vigour so as to develop a robust and secure digital infrastructure in the country.

    •  Pritam Kumar @pritam_cd

      -Introduction is okay…
      -Points under advantages are good and well elaborated…
      -Under concerns- points need explanation…though ideas are good…
      -Conclusion is okay…
      Overall good attempt…well done…keep practicing…
      Marks awarded: 5/10

  •  Utkarsh Saxena @utkarshsaxena

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      -Introduction is very good…
      -Points under advantages talks about only administrative part…we do have other areas like agriculture, disaster management, early warning weather forecast, ease of doing business in financial and other corporate areas…etc…
      -More comprehensive conclusion needed…
      Refer some of the best answer from this section or our model answer for better clarity…

  •  mahi meher @tanujaparween7

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    •  Pritam Kumar @pritam_cd

      Hi Mahi…You are most welcome in our answer writing initiatives…

    •  mahi meher @tanujaparween7

      Thank..u sir..
      U cant even imagine sir..what u r doing..for the aspirant like us..who are dreaming with civil servant dream..thank u..for all ur guiedance

    •  Pritam Kumar @pritam_cd

      -Introduction – Try interlinking the paragraphs and sentences in answer…avoid using colloquial language specially in answer…we need to organise our language as well as words and sentences…also need to be careful about repetition of ideas and sentences….
      -Points under 2nd para of intro is of narrow context…we need to think on wider perspective…like digitalization can boost economy, governance, weather forecasting, trade and commerce etc…with its application like Artificial intelligence, Big Data initiatives etc…
      -Individual points should be complete in itself…talking about education sector, banking sector will show our narrow interpretation…
      -Under some concern, first para is irrelevant…points of concern are okay…need to explain in order to complete them…
      -Poor conclusion…it should be based on what points you have mentioned in answer…need to be comprehensive…
      Refer some of the best answer from this section or our model answers for better clarity…

    •  mahi meher @tanujaparween7

      Ok..i ll look after..it..
      Thank..u..alot sir..

  •  mahi meher @tanujaparween7

    1st time i wrote ans..
    From last 4 month iam following CD..it is best blog for civil service preaparation..& iam very thank full..to CD and team..
    Plz..review..and sorry..i tried but ans..uploaded twice..

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