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17 Aug 2017 | GS 1 | Along with economic factor it was the misrule and inefficiency of CZAR Nicholas II which sowed the seeds of Russian Revolution. Comment.

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    Q.1)  Along with economic factor it was the misrule and inefficiency of CZAR Nicholas II which sowed the seeds of Russian Revolution. Comment.

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  •  LLJ @l-lj

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    •  RK Sahoo @ramakant-sahoo

      Official CD Review:
      – intro is well begun but the 4th and 5th line of intro lacks clarity of idea..please focus on sentence formation, grammar and spelling errors like ‘loose’, ‘suppressed’ etc…(please go through your answer again and find these words to understand what i’m referring to)
      – good points on economic failures …key points like presence of feudal and class elements, corruption, poor agri technology also needed mention…
      – otherwise good attempt…take care of your articulation and language…work slightly more on precise content which i refer to as targeted content( you can refer to the model answer tom)
      Marks awarded: 4.5/10

    •  Vk Kumar @vkkumar

      Thanks a lot sir. Actually i find this queation bit difficult to handle thats why lack of clarity. Will follow model answer 🙂 and work hard to improve english 🙁

  •  LLJ @l-lj

    Apologies for wrong upload earlier

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    •  RK Sahoo @ramakant-sahoo

      Official CD Review:
      – intro is good…points and structuring for first half of the answer is good…however you have not emphasized more on misrule of Czar Nicholas which was the prominent cause besides what is mentioned…This needed emphasis…esp corruption, negligence towards agri technology, mass suppression, feudal lords, rasputin role, wars and conflicts etc…
      – good points on socio-economic causes…not enough justice to second part of the answer…
      – otherwise good articulation skills..…be holistic in approach and prioritise the key demands of the question carefully…conclusion could have been better…You can do much much better…great potential to maximise your marks..don’t let your guard towards the end of your answer…maintain consistency…
      – Otherwise, very good attempt…keep it up
      Marks awarded: 4.5/10

  •  Akhil Pareek @akhil91pareek

    Request you to please review.

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    •  RK Sahoo @ramakant-sahoo

      Official Cd Review
      – brilliant articulation and presentation of points…content is precise and targeted too..
      – besides missing out on few points like Czar was weak, administration corrupt, dominance of aristocracy, your answer is more or less complete…one grammatical error in the conclusion part( changed the future course..)
      – Otherwise, very good effort, keep it up!!
      Marks Awarded:6/10

  •  Parvathy @parvathy2490

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    •  RK Sahoo @ramakant-sahoo

      Official Cd Review:
      – use your space and time wisely..the intro part needs more precision and avoid unnecessary data..Infact here u need to choose your content wisely..plan before itself….
      – content of second half is presented well…where is the socio economic reasons which was required before justifying czar’s prominent role…
      – work on better structuring…few points are good…
      – again in conclusion you have dragged over irrelevant …stick to the point precisely…key points like poor agri technology, mass suppression, corruption in aristocracy etc missing… don’t digress too much…you don’t have the time and luxury in such type of questions..
      – Keep writing, much improved attempt…you can do much much better…
      Marks Awarded: 3.5/10

    •  Parvathy @parvathy2490

      Thank you. Will Incorporate all these suggestions next time onwards

  •  Anudeep @anudeepnairm

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