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17 Aug 2017 | GS 2 | The proposed wage code Bill, which incorporates a universal minimum wage, will lead to higher unemployment and informalization of the economy. In the light of the above statement critically Discuss the key features of proposed wage code bill?

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  •  arjun choudhary @arjun-choudhary1

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    •  Pritam Kumar @pritam_cd

      -Poor Introduction…explain about the bill…what is about…
      -Points mentioned are good…
      -Good conclusion…
      -Well structured and well arranged points…
      Good approach…keep it up…
      Marks awarded: 5/10

  •  HI-M @ladies-corner

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    •  Pritam Kumar @pritam_cd

      -Good introduction…
      -You have over-emphasized on the positive aspects…ignoring the demand of the question (Criticism)…
      -You have brought few criticism that also too general…need to be specific…
      -Conclusion should be based on the criticism and not the basis of positive aspects…need to analyse the critical facts…
      You have potential to write better answer…keep writing…
      Good approach…
      Marks awarded: 3/10

    •  HI-M @ladies-corner

      thank u sir

  •  sapna sharma @sapna9186

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    •  Pritam Kumar @pritam_cd

      -Introduction is a bit long…need to shorten it…however, the ideas are good…
      -Points mentioned are good…well arranged and structured…
      Good attempt…keep it up…keep writing…
      Marks awarded: 6/10

    •  sapna sharma @sapna9186

      thank u sir for reviewing.

  •  akshay singh @akshayms19

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    •  Pritam Kumar @pritam_cd

      -Introduction should be about the bill…not the background…what is the main concern of the bill…
      -Why this bill can be counter productive…2nd point wrongly interpreted…Point 1, 3 and 4 need justification…
      -Mention what should be the balance view…conclusion should be holistic not the reference only…
      However a good approach…you have potential to improve further….keep writing…
      Marks awarded: 3/10

  •  Apollo @sreerajeet

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      -Introduction should contain the gist of the bill…elaborate the introduction more…
      -Bring justification to the points a, b, c and d under criticism…bring more points in criticism…
      -Conclusion is good….
      Good approach…you have potential to improve further…keep writing…
      Marks awarded: 4/10

    •  Apollo @sreerajeet

      Thanks @pritam_cd

    •  Apollo @sreerajeet

      @pritam_cd.
      Kindly review. If it is not legible, then I can type it out.

  •  Root @root

    Guys,

    do peer review each other. It won’t be possible for the mentors to review each and every question but that should not deter you guys from giving another reading and gain extra points from each other.

    •  Vk Kumar @vkkumar

      @root
      Though i understand the limitations and constrains, but it would be highly appreciated if mentors could continue reviewing. Mentor review is something which makes CD plateform different from other. Peer review is not bad idea but mentors review have a psychological impact.
      I hope i am not asking for too much.

    •  Root @root

      “I hope i am not asking for too much.”
      heh.

      – We will have to come to a common ground. While we do realise the difference between peer and mentor reviews, we also face a constraint on timelines + efficacy when each mentor spends 15 minutes per answer to do justice to your efforts

      – We are finalising a plan and will come out with an announcement in a day or two

      PS: Target Mains is actively monitored by the core content team here so be assured that we will take care of the psychological impact 🙂

    •  Vk Kumar @vkkumar

      @root,
      Since you mentioned in mail that “If we will get good response we will rope in ‘in-service’ IAS/IPS officers in a near future to personally review the papers of senior/veteran candidates”, so i thought that i was not asking for too much 🙂 i just wanted mentor review 🙁

      But i totally understand your point. Hopefully your new plan will have something for us aspirants to be happy.
      Fingers crossed….

  •  sam @sam-r1o

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    •  Pritam Kumar @pritam_cd

      -Good Introduction…points are good…
      -Bring more ideas in criticism….
      -Be specific and mention what actually should be done in conclusion…
      However, a good attempt…keep writing…very positive chance is there to improve further…
      Marks awarded: 4.5/10

    •  sam @sam-r1o

      sir,Thank you for review

  •  LLJ @l-lj

    Apologies for wrong upload earlier

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    •  Pritam Kumar @pritam_cd

      -Introduction is too short…elaborate more on introduction…
      -Reduce the positive points as the question demands criticism…include more criticisms…
      -Explain and justify the points b, c and d in 2nd page…
      -Conclusion should be based on the criticisms and not on the positive aspects…you have tried to balance it but it still tends towards positiveness….need to bring holistic conclusion…
      However, a good approach…keep writing…
      Marks awarded: 4/10

  •  Akhil Pareek @akhil91pareek

    Request you to please review.

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    •  Pritam Kumar @pritam_cd

      -Good introduction…ideas are good…points mentioned are good…
      well arranged and structured…
      -Focus more on criticism…bring more relevant points in criticism…
      Good attempt…keep it up…keep writing…
      Marks awarded: 5/10

  •  Vk Kumar @vkkumar

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    •  Pritam Kumar @pritam_cd

      -Good introduction…
      -Points are good…well arranged ideas…well structured…
      Conclusion is also good…
      Good attempt…keep it up…keep writing…
      Marks awarded: 6/10

    •  Vk Kumar @vkkumar

      Thank you very much for feedback sir. 🙂

  •  Mohit Raj @mohitraj

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    •  Pritam Kumar @pritam_cd

      -Introduction should be about the bill…what actually it is?…you are explaining about background and situation…
      -You have very lucid language…ability to mould the sentences…keep it up…
      -We need to focus more on criticism…reduce the positive benefits…
      -Conclusion is good…
      However a good attempt…keep it up…
      Marks awarded: 5/10

    •  Mohit Raj @mohitraj

      Thank you so much Sir, Very precise reviews…Always encourages me..🙂

  •  Parvathy @parvathy2490

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    •  Pritam Kumar @pritam_cd

      -Good Introduction…
      -Points are good…can be made more specific and unique…
      -Conclusion is good…
      Good attempt…keep practicing…
      Marks awarded: 4.5/10

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