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17 Aug 2017 | GS 4 | What in meant by ‘environmental ethics? Why is it important to study? Discuss any one environmental issue from the viewpoint of environmental ethics.

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  • GS Paper 4 

    Q.4) What in meant by ‘environmental ethics? Why is it important to study? Discuss any one environmental issue from the viewpoint of environmental ethics.


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  •  LLJ @l-lj

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    •  Pritam Kumar @pritam_cd

      -Introduction is good…
      -Point a, b and c is good…however the question does not demand the point d…so mentioning it in a separate para as a point will be irrelevant here and will waste word limit.
      -Bring more points as importance…
      -Example mentioned is good…
      However, a good attempt…keep it up…keep writing…
      Marks awarded: 4.5/10

  •  arjun choudhary @arjun-choudhary1

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    •  Pritam Kumar @pritam_cd

      -Work on way of sentence formation….check 1st para…
      -Introduction is good…
      -you have shown importance through negative reasons…bring some positive reasons as well…like…Earth and its creatures have moral status, in other words, are worthy of our ethical concern…Earth and its creatures have intrinsic value, meaning that they have moral value merely because they exist, not only because they meet human needs…human beings should consider “wholes” that include other forms of life and the environment…etc…
      -You have brought sufficient examples…
      -Conclusion would have been more holistic…summarizing all the factors mentioned by you…
      However a good attempt….keep it up…
      Marks awarded: 4.5/10

    •  arjun choudhary @arjun-choudhary1

      thankyou sir

  •  Amaragani SUNIL KUMAR @CE12B1002

    pls consider 2page and 1page in order. Due to technical issue i cannot update in order.sorry for the inconvenience.

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    •  Pritam Kumar @pritam_cd

      -Very good introduction…
      -Mahatma Gandhi’s words…’Nature has sufficient resource to meet every one’s need not every one’s greed’…
      -Your example seems of narrows context…Ethics is also about betterment of larger masses which we call it Utilitarianism…So with utilitarianism concept your example seems of narrow context…
      -Your answer goes in different direction…very few points mentioned as importance…you have overemphasised on examples…
      -Last para is Ok…but conclusion needed…
      -However a good attempt…More chances of improvement is there…
      Marks awarded: 3.5/10

  •  Aditya Pokra @adipokra

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    •  Pritam Kumar @pritam_cd

      -Elaborate more about Environmental Ethics…
      -Bring more points as importance…like to develop morality/concern towards environment…To learn to protect entire ecosystem etc…
      -Example is too elaborated…Conclusion needed…
      However, a good attempt…bring balance in your points as per the requirement of each part of the question…
      Keep writing…
      Marks awarded: 3.5/10

  •  sarvjit mann @whitegoodyblack

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    •  Pritam Kumar @pritam_cd

      -Introduction is good…
      -Heading should be followed by sentences…don’t place heading in between the sentences…
      -You are mentioning the problems caused by environmental changes…the importance of study will be to bring solutions for these problems…more importance like…to understand the essential features of moral and ethical thinking about environment…To learn and protect…To develop skills to recognize and deploy moral discourse etc…
      -Example mentioned need more clarification…connect the example with ethical thinking and practices of developed and developing countries…
      Conclusion is good…
      However, a good attempt…keep it up…
      Marks awarded: 4.5/10

  •  Vk Kumar @vkkumar

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    •  Pritam Kumar @pritam_cd

      -Good introduction…
      -Importance of study mentioned are good…
      -Examples are good…
      -Well structured answer…good approach…Keep it up…Keep writing…
      Marks awarded: 6/10

    •  Vk Kumar @vkkumar

      Thanks a lot sir. Though you guys are doing wonderful job, but plz make sure that you also get enough sleep. 🙂

  •  Parvathy @parvathy2490

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    •  Pritam Kumar @pritam_cd

      -Introduction is good…
      -Points are different from what the question is asking…you have shown only one importance in 2nd para…that too is elaborated unnecessarily…
      -Ethical concern in the example is missing…
      Demand of the question has not been fulfilled…
      Read the question carefully and attempt accordingly…
      Marks awarded: 2.5/10

    •  Parvathy @parvathy2490

      Oops sorry. Thank you for pointing out the mistakes. Appreciating your efforts to check each and every ans that too very very late night.i can see reviews at 2 am 3 am 5 am .. hats off. Thank you so much

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