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5 Nov 2017 | Target Mains | Question 7

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  • The local self-government system in India has not proved to be an effective instrument of governance”. Critically examine the statement and give your views to improve the situation. (UPSC MAINS)


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  •  Khemchand Gujjar @khemchand-gujjar

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    •  Pritam Kumar @pritam_cd

      -Introduction is a good one…
      -Point 1 on first page…its incomplete…uniformity in what???
      -The points are very good… and well presented…though some modification needed…like talk about implementing recommendations of 2nd ARC devolution of fund, functions and functionaries, bringing transparency in election process, ensuring participation of broad members of society…etc…bringing example will show track on recent development…
      We need to criticize the negative points with positive one here…as the question is asking about criticisms…
      Good approach…keep practicing…
      follow up with our model answers for better understanding…

  •  Narayana Sarma @narayanacbe

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    •  Pritam Kumar @pritam_cd

      Narayan…
      -Your introduction is okay…
      -Points are good though the question is asking about the criticisms…we need to mention the criticisms of negative points in positive form…this is the gist of this question…
      -Though the rest of the points are good…and well written…but need to follow the instructions of question….
      Good approach…focus on the question…
      Follow up with our model answers for better clarity…

    •  Narayana Sarma @narayanacbe

      Thanks for the feedback sir. I will focus on question decoding more.

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