6th December 2018 | Daily Answer Writing Enhancement

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Question 1)

Many foreign scholars opined that Indians had no sense of history writing and whatever was written in the name of history is nothing more than a story without any sense. Do you agree with this view. Critically discuss? (150 W/10 M)

Question 2)

Sedition law has often been in news for all the wrong reasons. But it still remains an important legislation. Comment.

Question 3)

The climate change and economic uncertainties have affected the Indian farmers most leading to farm distress and rising number of suicides. Discuss different government initiatives towards farmers’ distress and analyze whether Minimum Basic Payment will be beneficial to address the problems. (250 W/ 15 M)

Question 4)

The rape of small girls on the scale at which it is currently taking place, especially in the north, signifies a breakdown of the ethical order of common living. Do you agree? Suggest solutions.(10 Marks)

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anita raul
anita raul
6 Dec, 2018

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    Pritam Kumar
    15 Dec, 2018

    Hi Anita,
    -Introduction seems okay…
    -The language in 2nd para is poor…please work on articulating language….avoid using colloquial language…
    -1st para of 2nd page is irrelevant….bring concrete point…you are repeating the same idea which the question is asking…instead of replying or answering…bring evidence…
    -Points are too general and also not logically arranged…
    -Overall, below average answer…
    Please refer our model answer for better clarity…

      anita raul
      anita raul
      15 Dec, 2018

      thank u sir i will refer that.


        anita raul
        anita raul
        6 Dec, 2018

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          anita raul
          6 Dec, 2018

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            6 Dec, 2018

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              Dhritiman
              Dhritiman
              6 Dec, 2018

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                Dhritiman
                Dhritiman
                6 Dec, 2018

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                  Dhritiman
                  Dhritiman
                  6 Dec, 2018

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                    SwethaMoturi
                    SwethaMoturi
                    6 Dec, 2018

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                      Pritam Kumar
                      15 Dec, 2018

                      Hi Sweta,
                      -Poor introduction…the points gets started randomly…also the individual points are incomplete not conveying complete idea…
                      -Points under Steps taken by government are good…
                      -Again the 2nd part i.e. Minimum Basic payment…the argument starts randomly without explaining anything about MBP…Though good points under concerns…
                      -Conclusion is very good…
                      -Overall, good attempt…need to work on introduction and bringing linkages among points…the rest is good…
                      Keep practicing…will improve for sure…
                      Marks awarded: 4.5/15


                        Shefali kashyap
                        Shefali kashyap
                        6 Dec, 2018

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                          Pritam Kumar
                          15 Dec, 2018

                          Hi Shefali,
                          -Please pay attention to the word limit…
                          -Introductory para is good…but 1st para and 2nd para both contains almost the same ideas and seems like repetition…
                          -The rest of the points are very good and explained beautifully…Nice answer…
                          -Need to modify the introduction a bit…except intro the answer is very good…
                          Keep writing…
                          Marks awarded: 5.5/10


                            Shefali kashyap
                            Shefali kashyap
                            6 Dec, 2018

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                              Pritam Kumar
                              17 Dec, 2018

                              Hi Shefali,
                              -Please ensure the upload is in proper direction…
                              -Introduction seems to be good…
                              -Ideas under sedition law is okay…However, the points under issues with sedition Act need logical arrangement with more clarity in idea…Mere criticism to government and government working should not be termed as criticism…which has been witnessed in recent times…Example – JNU case…Examples mentioned here need more clarity…
                              -2nd page 1st para…SC judgement…it should not be ‘speaking against the government’…rather positively criticizing the government should not be seen as sedition…
                              -Under some measures…There should be regulation of free speech and expression. It should not be set on the free will of speakers other wise will create chaos in society…effective and positive restriction is necessary…
                              -You have not answered the 2nd part of the question…why it is still important….Here we can mention that… with diverse society, multiculturalism the demand of all can not be fulfilled absolutely by the government and hence people tend to take rebelious action…in such condition this law still holds its importance…
                              -Conclusion should not be ought rightly rejecting…it should be a balanced one…

                              Overall, Good attempt…need to bring specificity and more wider views regarding the topic…
                              Keep practicing…will improve for sure…Refer our model answer…
                              Marks awarded: 3.5/10


                                Pritam Kumar
                                17 Dec, 2018

                                Hi shivani,
                                -Introduction seems incomplete…Misuse in reported but when (in British India or in Present days)…
                                -who is rulers here…? Points need clarity…they seem to be incomplete conveying incomplete meaning..Points are too general…you are only talking that law has been invoked without any evidence or proof…such attempt is immature and incomplete…
                                -Overall, the answer is without concrete point and explained in general manner without any examples…Also there is no sufficient argument why this law is still important…Such attempts shows lack of conceptual clarity regarding the topic…

                                Refer our model answer for better clarity…
                                Marks awarded: 3/10


                                  Pritam Kumar
                                  22 Dec, 2018

                                  Hi Prafull,
                                  -Introduction is very good..and well written…
                                  -Points are also good…
                                  -However, under defending this law…we can say that it has the potential to curb the uprising in various parts of India…like naxalism and maoism…and other hatred uprisings which may be by any groups…so it helps in maintaining internal security…rather than external…

                                  -The points under conclusion is more like way forward…write conclusion in paragraph…without any numberings…

                                  Overall, good attempt…and well written answer…keep it up…keep writing…

                                  Marks awarded: 6/10


                                    gk
                                    6 Dec, 2018

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                                      Pritam Kumar
                                      17 Dec, 2018

                                      Hi GK,
                                      -Answer seems to be good…
                                      -However, one thing we must accept here that India does not have chronologically mentioned historical events…
                                      -The examples mentioned are okay…though we can also include…Puranas, Samhitas, Rig-Vedas, Dharmashastras etc. as well as Indica by Megasthenes, Pliny’s Naturalis Historia, documents of Fa Hien, Hiuen Tsang etc…who wrote for the contemporary rulers of their times….here more we need to provide the evidence supporting the existence of written history…
                                      -The logic of conclusion seems irrelevant…rather it should be contrary in nature…when you are countering that Indians do have the sense of history writing…then conclusion must support your argument…saying the allegation of foreign scholars are harsh and does not stand true…

                                      Overall, Good attempt…well written and arranged…try incorporating above points which will bring more specificity in answer…

                                      Keep writing…
                                      Marks awarded: 4.5/10

                                        gk
                                        17 Dec, 2018

                                        Thank you Sir. Will definitely improve.


                                          gk
                                          6 Dec, 2018

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                                            Pritam Kumar
                                            17 Dec, 2018

                                            Hi GK,
                                            -Please leave margin on both edges of the page…its not worth writing without margin…develop habits now onwards…
                                            -Your discussion seems to be okay…but the points are without any contemporary examples…
                                            -Also need to mention the misuse of this section on the part of government…like punishing those who criticized government…distinction between criticism and growing against government…etc…bring example of recent JNU case…and other similar cases…

                                            Overall, good attempt…incorporating relevant contemporary examples will add quality in your answer…

                                            Keep writing…
                                            Marks awarded: 4.5/10

                                              gk
                                              17 Dec, 2018

                                              Yes Sir. This was posted sometimes back. Have been drawing margins ever since you told me to do.


                                                gk
                                                6 Dec, 2018

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                                                  Pritam Kumar
                                                  17 Dec, 2018

                                                  Hi GK,
                                                  -There is no introduction in your answer…You started with the points randomly…
                                                  -You need to link first five points (of first page) with the climate change…and distress leading to suicide…this is missing from answer…
                                                  -Government initiatives are okay…
                                                  -However, there is no mention about minimum basic payment…

                                                  Need more focus on the question and also need to address all aspects of the question…

                                                  Overall good…keep practicing…
                                                  Refer our model answer or other best answer reviewed for better clarity…

                                                  Marks awarded: 3.510


                                                    gk
                                                    6 Dec, 2018

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                                                      Pritam Kumar
                                                      17 Dec, 2018

                                                      Hi GK,
                                                      -Introductory line is okay…However, it should also mention about the breakdown of moral or ethical order…
                                                      The next line just randomly gets started without any justification…and also there is no linkages among points…
                                                      -your emphasis is not on breakdown of ethical order…rather you have provided other reasons…focus is being away from the question…
                                                      -Points are explained in just general order…
                                                      This is an average answer…need to bring more focus on question…
                                                      Refer our model answer for better clarity…
                                                      Marks awarded: 3/10


                                                        Dhritiman
                                                        Dhritiman
                                                        8 Dec, 2018

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                                                          Pritam Kumar
                                                          22 Dec, 2018

                                                          Hi Dhritiman,
                                                          Please work on your handwriting…increase your font size…write letters of the word in proper way…

                                                          -The answer posted here is of different question…This answer is of 5th December’s question…Kindly ensure before uploading…

                                                          -Though I’m reviewing it here itself…
                                                          -Introduction could have been more comprehensive…incorporating the ideas of importance of moral values and other values taught by the parents and teachers…Your introduction is very general and repeating the same line of the question…
                                                          -Role of father is very good and well written…
                                                          -The role of mother is also okay…
                                                          But the role of teacher could have been better…teacher taught us the compete in this contemporary world with contemporary ideas…teacher gives us the skill which help us to earn our livelihood…they also shape our conduct and behavious in this world, they also teach us to live our skillful life…etc…

                                                          Also need to bring conclusion…

                                                          Overall, good attempt…need to complete the ideas in answer…don’t leave them incomplete…
                                                          Keep writing…
                                                          Marks awarded: 4.5/10


                                                            Pritam Kumar
                                                            17 Dec, 2018

                                                            Hi Puru,
                                                            -Answer seems to be very general…
                                                            -You have shown only 2 or 3 evidence of ancient literature…The concern is of absent of chronology…we were highly dependent on religious text like Mahabharata, Ramayana, Puranas, Samhitas, vedas etc…which does not talk in direct sense about chronology…However, they do bring the sense of knowing about the chronology…Koutilya’s Arthashastra, Indica by Mgasthanes, Pliny’s Naturalis Historia, documents of Fa Hien, Hiuen Tsang etc…who wrote for the contemporary rulers of their times….and in the sense provide about chronology…We need to bring more of evidence to support the argument…
                                                            -Ideas in conclusion is good…need to bring more clarity…

                                                            Overall, good attempt…need to have more focus on question and address all aspects asked…

                                                            Keep writing…will improve for sure…
                                                            Refer our model answer for better clarity…
                                                            Marks awarded: 3.5/10

                                                              Puru Rajput
                                                              21 Dec, 2018

                                                              Dear pritam ,
                                                              My answers are not getting checked from last 8-9 days please let me knw the reason

                                                                Pritam Kumar
                                                                22 Dec, 2018

                                                                Hi Puru,
                                                                Due to busy schedule I could not check the answers…I will finish checking all the answers most probably by tomorrow…

                                                                  Puru Rajput
                                                                  22 Dec, 2018

                                                                  pritam please ceck my answrs also

                                                                    Puru Rajput
                                                                    22 Dec, 2018

                                                                    no answers are getting checked


                                                                      Pritam Kumar
                                                                      22 Dec, 2018

                                                                      Hi Puru,
                                                                      First, there is a suggestion…divide ideas in small paragraphs…it should also appear to be separate…

                                                                      -Answer seems to be okay…ideas mentioned are good but they need logical arrangement…

                                                                      -Also, we need to mention the specific reasons why there is growing insecurity for female child in society…mention some of the family habit, practices, treating girl as inferior, more favour to male even if he makes mistakes, criminality in mindset, society being dumb on such issues even if anyone observes about any such incidents…etc…etc…
                                                                      Then, next it should come about solution…(solutions by you are okay….) though more micro perspective you can add by saying that it should start from the family…family should treat every member equal…the say of every member should be adhered and implemented, then education system, equality in school, conduct by teachers, conduct by members of society etc…etc…

                                                                      Overall, first part of the answer seems general…2nd part is okay…also need to be micro observer regarding the points…the rest is good….keep writing will improve for sure…

                                                                      Marks awarded: 4.5/10

                                                                      Refer our model answer for better clarity…


                                                                        Pritam Kumar
                                                                        22 Dec, 2018

                                                                        Hi Puru,
                                                                        -Introduction seems poor…more clarity needed here in points…also there is no sequence in ideas presentation…you started with present NCRB data, gone to justifying its existence, then talking about the colonial timings….Need to arrange your ideas logically…
                                                                        -Third page 1st para seems without taking any stand…

                                                                        Overall, good attempt…You have good ideas regarding the topic the need is to arrange the ideas logically and bring clarity in some points…

                                                                        Keep writing…will improve for sure…

                                                                        Marks awarded: 4/10
                                                                        Refer our model answer for better clarity…


                                                                          Kapiushon
                                                                          Kapiushon
                                                                          15 Dec, 2018

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                                                                            Kapiushon
                                                                            Kapiushon
                                                                            15 Dec, 2018

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                                                                              Pritam Kumar
                                                                              22 Dec, 2018

                                                                              Hi Kapiushon,
                                                                              -Very good answer…very beautifully written with logical arrangement of ideas…nice presentation…well done…keep it up…

                                                                              Keep writing…
                                                                              Marks awarded: 6/10


                                                                                Kapiushon
                                                                                Kapiushon
                                                                                15 Dec, 2018

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                                                                                  Pritam Kumar
                                                                                  22 Dec, 2018

                                                                                  Hi Kapiushon,
                                                                                  -Very impressive introduction…Points are very good with precisely written ideas and well explained with wider logic…good one…
                                                                                  -Solution seems to be okay…however, point number 4 on third page need to make more clear…why mental health?…mentality of youth including family and society need to be changed and influenced. we can take the help of social media in positive sense, schools, colleges, and other public places should be made equally accessed by male and female, mindset of the family members needs to change, parents need to treat their children with equality without any gender biased etc…etc…
                                                                                  -Conclusion could have much better with more comprehensive ideas…the ideas here is repeated…

                                                                                  Overall, good attempt…first part is well written…2nd part need some modification…the rest approach is good…
                                                                                  Keep writing..
                                                                                  Marks awarded: 5/10


                                                                                    Kapiushon
                                                                                    Kapiushon
                                                                                    16 Dec, 2018

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                                                                                      Pritam Kumar
                                                                                      22 Dec, 2018

                                                                                      Hi Kapiushon,
                                                                                      -Very good answer…very precisely written ideas…with very good presentation…This answer is one of the nice one which I found in this AWE program…Very good…well done…keep it up…

                                                                                      Keep writing…
                                                                                      Marks awarded: 8.5/15