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- https://www.thehindu.com/
opinion/lead/fixing-the-rules- of-the-economy/ article33024404.ece - In the intro, mention how economic progress depends on productivity and not the population.
- In the body, explain the definition of productivity and how small but skilled labour force match the ability of a large number of unskilled workers and contribute more to the economy. In the next part, mention the importance of enhancing the productivity of the labour force and mention the example of Japan in this regard. In the next part, elaborate on the role played by the technology which could augment as well as replace the workforce and its implications for the economy.
- Conclude by mentioning the need to enhance productivity to achieve economic prosperity.
tiwarisamiksha6@gmail.com
Hi Samiksha
Good introduction.
Follow a proper structure, do not write the solutions just after the introduction.
First tell what are the roadblocks in the way of productivity then suggest the way forward.
Leave some space between the lines and after the paragraphs, do not write this close.
Measures are discussed in a decent manner.
Good conclusion.
Work on space management.
Keep writing !
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Hi Somasis
Lackluster introduction, mention how economic progress depends on productivity and not the population.
This is a 10 marker question so you can skip this flow chart of different types of laborers.
Avoid writing the bullet points, substantiate each of them in one-two lines.
Leave some space after the paragraphs.
Good conclusion.
Try to update your content with current affairs.
Keep writing !
divyaloyola13@gmail.com
Hi Divya
Scan your sheet properly.
Good introduction.
After the introduction , try to give one small heading or else it seems that your introduction is of two paragraphs.
First tell what are the roadblocks in the way of productivity then suggest the way forward.
In the role of technology, you have written ‘workers saftyness’, avoid these type of mistakes and also substantiate this point that how worker’s safety will be ensured.
Good conclusion.
Underline keywords.
Keep writing !
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