Mentor’s Comments-
- In the introduction, talk about Covid19, lockdowns and the emergence of Work From Home culture.
- In the body, mention both positive and negative impacts of WFH on family relationships i.e., relationship with spouses, children and parents.
- Conclude accordingly.
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Shubham
You have asked to evaluate the impact with respect to FAMILY RELATIONSHIPS. So, the scope is already shortened in the question. So points like company revenue, expenses, political culture, travelling expenses, quarantine measure etc are not required.
Try to dissect the positive and negative impacts on relationships with children, elderly parents, spouses etc.
In positives you could mention development of strong bond with children as there is more time to spend; increased sense of responsibility with regards to children; more time for elderly parents; reinforcement of joint family; fulfilment of biological needs with regards to spouses; gender equality (shared domestic work) etc
In negatives you can talk about domestic violence (give some data to back); stress in relationships; lack of privacy; increased responsibility of women etc. Conflicts between spouses and difficulty in balancing family and work are good points.
Conclusion is fine.
Keep practicing. Try to keep your answer limited to what has been asked. 🙂
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you wrote completely different answer. not in line with the answer
First answer
Kindly, review the answers.Thank you