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- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/delhi- to-bern-drawing-closer-india- switzerland-8064548/ - In the intro, mention the 75th anniversary of Treaty of Friendship next year.
- In the body mention the various areas in which two countries are collaborating on digital transformation, sustainability, health, life sciences, medtech, infrastructure, cleantech, fintech, blockchain, AI and robotics. Also mention that innovation and investment continue to be the primary drivers of our bilateral relations. Mention the convergences in Swiss and Indian priorities at the UN Security Council.
- Conclude by mentioning that engagement is a result of not only shared priorities, but also shared democratic values and foreign policy independence.
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Sowmya
Introduction is fine but don’t use word like gonna, use going to.
The content of the answer is decent enough. However, it can be divided in two parts for better presentation- 1st part to show the current status of the relationship and the next part about way forward. Points related to current status are fine.
In way forward, you can talk about the enormous bilateral economic potential; cooperation indigital governance to digital self-determination; climate change partnership; can contribute to making the multilateral system more robust etc
Conclusion is fine.
Keep practicing. Overall, you are writing well, content is fine..try to improve the presentation a bit by including multiple subheadings, use of flowcharts etc 🙂
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