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- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/how- india-can-adapt-to-global- geoeconomics-churn-7750323/ - In the intro, mention the increasing rivalry between China and the US.
- In the body, mention the economic rise of China and its worsening relationship with the US and the assertive behaviour with the neighbouring countries. Also mention China’s strategy of using economic dependence for political gain and its impact on the global order. In the next part, mention how these changes are influencing India which is reflected in India’s decision to walk away from the RCEP, next mention the Quad and competition in the Indo-Pacific. In the approach for India suggest integration of financial, trade, technological, security and foreign policy.
- Conclude by mentioning the need for approach which can help India adapt to the changes in the global order.
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Chetan
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Your answer is looking more like an essay, try to break the answer in parts, give subheading for each part and then mention points for that part.
Introduction can be more concise, explain geopolitics and geoeconomics briefly and then come to current issue.
You can also use examples to explain the terms, mention about China’s economic rise and how it is using economic power to influence politics.
The question also asks the influence on India, you have skipped that part- you can add a section and mention points like India’s decision to walk away from the RCEP; free trade agreements with like minded countries like Australia, Britain, UAE and Israel; economic nationalism(policy of Atmanirbhar Bharat) etc
Then you can move to suggestions.. 1st point in suggestions is very abstract.. Mention exactly what does India need to learn or skip that point as there is a strong argument that India should be pragmatic and adapt to changing realities rather than remaining in the past.
2nd point should be mentioned earlier (in influence section).
In approach, you can mention the need to have an integrated approach to financial, trade, technological, security and foreign policies unlike the past.
Conclusion is okay.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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Siddharth
Introduction is good.
Influence on India part is also fine, but you have written more points (Afg, Iran, CAATSA sanctions etc) which are mainly geopolitics related.
Try mentioning some points which show how geopolitics is affecting India’s economic choices such as withdrawal from China-led RCEP, FTAs with like minded countries like UAE, Britain, Australia, Israel etc, economic nationalism (Atmanirbhar Bharat), trying to gain an edge with ASEAN through Act East policy etc
Points related to China are good.
Ways to tackle part is also good, you have given a micro view by mentioning individual nations. You can also mention that broadly India needs to have an integrated approach to financial, trade, technological, security and foreign policies unlike the past.
Write a concluding statement.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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Likhitha
Decent attempt.
Introduction is fine, after that you can write a few points showing changing relationship between geopolitics and geoeconomics at the global level. Here you can mention, US-China relationship which has changed from cooperation to strategic rivalry due to increasing economic clout of China, economic nationalism by countries including US, China, UK and India can also be mentioned.
Next give a subheading about ‘influence on India’. Points mentioned by you are good.
RCEP, SAGAR, Quad are all good points.
Suggestions are fine, also mention that broadly India needs to have an integrated approach to financial, trade, technological, security and foreign policies unlike the past.
Conclusion is good.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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