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- In the inttroduction explain about who Khudai Khidmatgars were.
- In the body talk about the contributions of Khudai Khidmatgars, a non-violent movement against British occupation of the Indian subcontinent. Discuss why did the Qissa Khwani Bazaar massacre happen? What was it? Explain the aftermath of the incident.
- Conclude with significance of the event in the modern Indian history of the country.
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Hi Deepika
Good introduction, but write in past tense.
Write the contribution after the aftermath, first write about the movement, write about ‘red shirt’, you can also write that inspired by the dissidence of the INC and the charismatic spiritual-political leadership of Mahatma Gandhi, the Red Shirts blossomed in 1930 during the civil disobedience movement.
Aftermath is well explained.
Good conclusion.
These type of questions need static knowledge, it is appreciable that you are attempting so well.
Keep working hard.
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Hi Dakshina
Good introduction but write in past tense.
In the contributions, you have written the features in the contribution.
Massacre and aftermath are well explained.
Good conclusion.
Well structured answer.
Overall a decent attempt.
Keep writing.
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Hi Sneha
You have explained about the Khudai Khidmatgars in a good manner.
Qissa Khwani Bazaar massacre and its aftermath are decently explained.
You can also write that inspired by the dissidence of the INC and the charismatic spiritual-political leadership of Mahatma Gandhi, the Red Shirts blossomed in 1930 during the civil disobedience movement.
Good concluding remarks.
Overall a decent attempt.
Persistence is the key to success, keep writing , you will succeed.
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Hi Sakshi
Summarise your introduction, then write about them in detail under a different heading.
This will make your answer more structured.
You can also write that inspired by the dissidence of the INC and the charismatic spiritual-political leadership of Mahatma Gandhi, the Red Shirts blossomed in 1930 during the civil disobedience movement.
Qissa Khwani Bazaar massacre and its aftermath are decently explained.
Good conclusion.
Work on handwriting, leave proper space between words and lines.
Avoid grammatical errors.
Keep writing , you will improve.