3rd July 2019 | Daily Answer Writing Enhancement

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Question 1)

High logistics cost is one of the major reasons for uncompetitive of Indian goods in global markets. In this reference discuss the significance of having multimodal logistic approach in India. What are challenges in present logistics sectors? Also discuss some of the major trans-boundary multimodal projects of India. (250 Words)

Question 2)

The quality of education can be a strong predictor of a country’s economic prosperity. In this context , suggest the revolutionary steps India Needs to refrom its Education sector and boost economy.(250 words)

Question 3)

What is the vision behind National Electric Mobility Mission Plan (NEMMP) 2020? How does it plan to achieve national fuel security and global manufacturing leadership.(250 words)

Question 4)

“There are two vital steps to ethics: knowing what is right and doing it. In the real world of politics, both are difficult.” Why establishing ethical framework in politics has become a distinct dream? (150 Words)

 

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Vishvjeet Holkar
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Vishvjeet Holkar
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All answers (1,2,3,4) are in this PDF 😊

Vishvjeet Holkar
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Sir i have another query …..if i write and upload all answers on Saturday….will i get review on answers ?
I am finding it difficult to get time on week days …….
Also sir pls review my answers of 1st july …..u have reviewed only Q1…..rest (Q2,Q3,Q4) are in same pdf of 1st july
Thank you in advance sir 😊

parth verma
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No Issues. But do tag me with the request of reviewing those answers because it gets difficult to go back everyday to search for answers.

parth verma
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Hi Vishvjeet
Kindly upload answers separately rather than putting them in a single file.

Q.1)
Intro needs better content and linkage with the issue of the question.
Why logistic sector is important in India? briefly discuss this after intro.
Challenges faced by logistic sector needs better explanation
Overall answer lacks depth and proper explanation. Points are just mentioned without any culmination or proper presentation. Work in this aspect.
Conclusion has no summary or proper content. It is just placed over there.
Answers have to be resourceful as well as informative.
Read the answers of Kunal Agarwal or Noira Khan to see they have been approached.

Marks: 1.5

Q.2) Let me tell how to improve your intro. You mentioned that ” according to EU, number of years in schooling…..”. After that, simply add that “according to ASER report, Indian students in schools have been lagging behind their counterparts globally and this needs to be addressed in order to get the maximum out of our demographic dividend”. This way you managed to give a start to your answer as well as linked it to the question’s topic.

What are the issues with our education system in School? This was supposed to be an important part of the discussion which you missed completely.

Decent way forwards.
Your second last paragraph could work well as your intro.

Marks: 2.5

Q.3)
While you did discussed NEMMP’s salient features but missed to tackle two demands of the questions: how will it achieve “national fuel security” and “Global manufacturing Leadership”.
Read the question carefully. If it is asking about something then you cannot beat around the bush. You have to tackle the core of the issue and answer it.

Marks: 1.5

Q.4)
Once again intro lacks linkage to the topic of the question.
Avoid words like boot-licking or goons. These are not the kinds of words you should use in mains answers. Language should be meaningful as well as decent.
Main part of the body is general in nature.
Why dont they know “what is right?”
Read the model answer.

Mars: 1.5

Utkarsh Saxena
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parth verma
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Hi Utkarsh
Very good answer.
Structure, presentation and content are decent in the answer.
Explanation is short and simple.
Nothing wrong in the answer.
Well done

Marks: 6

Utkarsh Saxena
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parth verma
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Once again you covered almost all the required areas of the question.
Answer is well balanced.
Try to use the demographic issue with the education to link it with the economic growth of the nation. Thats also an alternate structure of the answer.
But overall very good attempt.
Way forwards are pretty decent.

Marks: 5.5

Utkarsh Saxena
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parth verma
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You discussed one part of the question which was regarding global manufacturing leadership. But another aspect was “national fuel security ” which was not discussed in the answer.
Read the questions carefully and try to answer as much to the demands of the question.
Discussion in the answer is decent.
Language is good.

Marks: 3

Utkarsh Saxena
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parth verma
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Decent answer.
But its mostly discussing the second part: “not doing the right thing.”
Do discuss the first part as well: “knowing what is right “. Why dont they know what is right? What makes them to fail in this regard?
Good 2nd part of the answer.

Marks: 3.5

Mohsin Khursheed
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Q2. Payment ID
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parth verma
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Quite a comprehensive discussion.
All the dimensions are nicely linked and aptly discussed.
There is nothing that you have left in the answer in terms of content.
But do include the issue of demographic dividend in the answer somewhere.
Good use of graph.

Marks: 5.5

Varsha Chauhan
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parth verma
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Hi Varsha
Good 1st half.
Points are inclusive.
Linkage with multi modal logistic approach are decent.
Need better discussion on major trans-boundary multi modal projects of India..
Though good use of diagram but they are not self-explanatory.
Apart from this area, all the other parts of the answers are nicely covered.
keep it up.

Marks: 4.5

Varsha Chauhan
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parth verma
Admin

All embracing discussion.
Content are well placed and well discussed.
Coverage is fulsome and structure smooth.
Once again, nothing wrong in the answer.

Marks: 5.5

noira khan
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parth verma
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Hi Noira
You have covered almost all the required areas of the question.
Answer is discussed nicely and it is well balanced.
Try to use the demographic issue with the education to link it with the economic growth of the nation. Thats also an alternate structure of the answer.
But overall very good attempt.
Way forwards are pretty decent.
Keep writing

Marks: 6.5

noira khan
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parth verma
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While you did discussed NEMMP’s salient features but missed to tackle two demands of the questions: how will it achieve “national fuel security” and “Global manufacturing Leadership”.
Read the question carefully. If it is asking about something then you have to tackle the core of the issue and answer it.
The 2nd part of the answer is not called for and instead discuss the 2 core areas of the question and then give way forwards keeping them in mind.

Marks: 3

noira khan
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parth verma
Admin

Decent answer.
But its mostly discussing the second part: “not doing the right thing.”
Do discuss the first part as well: “knowing what is right “. Why dont they know what is right? What makes them to fail in this regard?
Good 2nd part of the answer.

Marks: 3.5

Kunal Aggarwal
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Q1

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parth verma
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Hi Kunal
Very good answer.
Linkages between various parts is done seamlessly.
Flow of the structure is decent.
Structure, presentation and content are decent in the answer.
Explanation is short and simple in the 1st and 2nd parts.
The discussion on the major trans-boundary multimodal projects of India needs more content and better discussion though.

Marks: 5

Kunal Aggarwal
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Thank you sir. I couldn’t recollect more content for multimodal projects at that time. When are the synposis or model answers for daily questions expected? They would be very helpful.

Kunal Aggarwal
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parth verma
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In the 1st part, discuss wee bit about the issues in the education sector keeping in mind the angle of country’s economic prosperity.
Rest of the answer is quite good, specially the part where you discussed the reforms that can be done in the education sector.
Excellent conclusion.

Marks: 5

Kunal Aggarwal
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parth verma
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While you did discussed NEMMP’s salient features but missed to tackle two demands of the questions: how will it achieve “national fuel security” and “Global manufacturing Leadership”.
Discuss the 2 core areas of the question and then give way forwards keeping them in mind.
The content in the 1st part of the answer is wonderful.

Marks: 3

Kunal Aggarwal
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parth verma
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First paragraph is good but you can skip the 2nd para.
Do not go out of the demand in the questions with word limits of 150 words.
Decent answer.
But its mostly discussing the second part: “not doing the right thing.”
Do discuss the first part as well: “knowing what is right “. Why dont they know what is right? What makes them to fail in this regard?
Good 2nd part of the answer.

Marks: 3.5

Varsha Chauhan
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parth verma
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good 1st half.
Decent use of flowchart.
Discuss wee bit about the issues in the education sector “keeping in mind the angle of country’s economic prosperity.”
Rest of the answer is quite good.
The part where you discussed the reforms that can be done in the education sector is sublime in content, explanation and presentation.
Good that you mentioned Kasturiranjan Committee.
Excellent conclusion.

Marks: 6

avani k
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parth verma
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Hi Avani

Why logistic sector is important in India? briefly discuss this after intro.
Challenges faced by logistic sector needs better explanation
Overall answer has depth but lacks proper explanation. Points are exhaustive but they are just mentioned without any culmination or proper presentation. Work on this aspect.
Good use of diagram. Explanation there is quite good.
Good way forward and conclusion

Marks: 3.5

avani k
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parth verma
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Good and unique approach in the intro. Excellent use of flowchart. Keep it up.
good discussion in terms of content and coverage.
Its very exhaustive and deep this time.
Linkage of various issues to the preceding discussion is done effortlessly.
Recommendations regarding corporate-education system is excellent.
Quite a good answer.

Marks: 6

avani k
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parth verma
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The discussion in the 1st part is good.
But mention the challenges that the sector will face while achieving national fuel security and global manufacturing leadership.
Discuss way forwards keeping these 2 factors in mind.
Rest of the answer is fine..
Marks: 4

avani k
Member

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parth verma
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Examples quoted of D Roopa mam or Forest officer are not related to politics but civil servant. Try to give examples which are relevant.
its mostly discussing the second part: “not doing the right thing.”
Do discuss the first part as well: “knowing what is right “. Why dont they know what is right? What makes them to fail in this regard?\
Weak conclusion. What should those “ethical values and framework” be that you mentioned in the concluding paragraph.

Marks: 2.5

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parth verma
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Hi Vinod
Do not start the answer in the intro itself.
Use the 1st part of main body to discuss your salient points regarding challenges in logistic sector.
What is multimodal logistic approach?
What is the significance of having multimodal logistic approach in India.
What are the challenges in having multimodal logistic approach in India?
What are the way forwards?

You have to discuss these subheadings which you missed completely.
Discussion is general in nature though you tried to give exhaustive points.

Marks: 2

vinod bansal
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parth verma
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Quite a lengthy intro.
1st part is decent.
Way forwards are decent but do give some recommendations regarding industry-education collaboration system.
Try to use the demographic issue with the education to link it with the economic growth of the nation.
Answer ends abruptly with no conclusion
You can mention recent Kasturiranjan Committee report.

Marks: 2.5

vinod bansal
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parth verma
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Once again you have tried to put maximum points in your answer but explanation and lack of presentation hampers it.
Decent discussion in the 1st part.
But way forward/conclusion seems misplaced and incomplete.
Always give way forwards separately and with proper discussion.

Marks: 3

vinod bansal
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parth verma
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Answer is quite general in terms of content and discussion.
Try to give examples which are relevant.
Answer is mostly discussing the second part: “not doing the right thing.”
Do discuss the first part as well: “knowing what is right “.
Why dont they know what is right?
What makes them to fail in this regard?
Weak conclusion.
What should those “ethical framework” be that you mentioned in the concluding paragraph.

Marks: 1.5

Prakhar Bharadwaj
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parth verma
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Hi Prakhar
Very good answer.
Nothing wrong in the answer.
Excellent attempt.
Linkages between various parts is done seamlessly.
Flow of the structure is decent.
Structure, presentation and content are superb in the answer.
Explanation is short and simple in the 1st and 2nd parts.
The discussion on the major trans-boundary multimodal projects of India is thorough.

Marks: 6

Prakhar Bharadwaj
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parth verma
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Quite a lengthy intro.
1st part is decent but do discuss what ails the education sector in India?.
Way forwards are quite decent but do give some recommendations regarding industry-education collaboration system.
Try to use the demographic issue with the education to link it with the economic growth of the nation.
Flow of the answer is good.

Marks: 4.5

Prakhar Bharadwaj
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parth verma
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The discussion in the 1st part is good.
But mention the challenges that the sector will face while achieving national fuel security and global manufacturing leadership.
You have discussed them in the concluding paragraph but a brief and yet more explanatory discussion is needed in this regard.
Rest of the answer is fine.
Points have decent coverage in the 1st part.

Marks: 4

Prakhar Bharadwaj
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parth verma
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Answer is mostly discussing the second part: “not doing the right thing.”
Do discuss the first part as well: “knowing what is right “.
Why dont they know what is right?
What makes them to fail in this regard?
Good conclusion.
Language and explanation are excellent.

Marks: 3

pranab prakash
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Q1

parth verma
Admin

The intro and the 1st part of the answer is good.
But certain aspects of the required discussions are missing like:
What is multimodal logistic approach?
What is the significance of having multimodal logistic approach in India.
What are the challenges in having multimodal logistic approach in India?
What are the way forwards in this regard of multimodal logistic approach?

You have to discuss these subheadings which you missed completely.
Answer has no conclusion.

Marks: 3.5

pranab prakash
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Q2

parth verma
Admin

Quite a decent intro.
1st part is decent.
Points are good and their coverage comprehensive.
Way forwards are decent but do give some recommendations regarding industry-education collaboration system.
Try to use the demographic issue with the education to link it with the economic growth of the nation.
You can mention recent Kasturiranjan Committee report.
Good conclusion.

Marks: 4.5

pranab prakash
Member

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Q3

parth verma
Admin

balance of the answer is lacking in terms of structure and content.
You dont need to discuss why e vehicles are need of the hour.
The discussion in the 1st part is good.
But mention the challenges that the sector will face while achieving national fuel security and global manufacturing leadership.
The last part of the answer is not needed and use the time and space for the discussion of way forwards and conclusion.

marks: 2.5

Parth Ranjan
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parth verma
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Hi Parth
Decent answer.
Flow of the structure is decent.
Structure and content are satisfactory in the answer.
Explanation is short and simple in the 1st and 2nd parts.
The discussion on the major trans-boundary multimodal projects of India needs more content and better discussion though.
Way forwards need to be discussed in more comprehensive manner.

Marks: 4.5

Parth Ranjan
Member

Q2
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parth verma
Admin

Answer is quite good, specially the part where you discussed the reforms that can be done in the education sector.
Coverage of the answer is all-encompassing,
In the 1st part, discuss wee bit about the issues in the education sector keeping in mind the angle of country’s economic prosperity.
Excellent conclusion.

Marks: 5.5