9th January 2019 | Daily Answer Writing Enhancement

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Question 1)

Bhagat Singh was considered as one of the most influential revolutionary of Modern India. Through light on the significance of the thoughts of Bhagat Singh in the present times. (250 W/ 15 M)

Question 2)

Bangladesh has been India’s most important allies strategically as well as economically. Highlight India’s interest in Bangladesh and analyze what does economic transformation of Bangladesh mean for the Subcontinent as a whole. (250 W/ 15 M)

Question 3)

If implemented Social Media communication hub will transform India into a Surveillance state? Critically comment. (150 W/ 10 M)

Question 4)

‘Courage and perseverance have a magical talisman, before which difficulties disappear and obstacles vanish into air’. – ‘John Adams’ (10 marks 150 words)

 

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ANUBHAW MISHRA
ANUBHAW MISHRA
19 Feb, 2019

CDTEST 23406 ANS 3comment imagecomment image

    trojan123
    trojan123
    19 Feb, 2019

    hi ANUBHAW MISHRA
    your answer seems to be okay..
    you need to shorten intro max 3-4 lines, so that you can do justice to demand of question…
    emphasize upon social communication hub clearly rather generalised points
    elaborate upon why such steps is needed…
    last para is placed haphazardly…
    lastly conclusion is missing..
    refer to model answer.


      ANUBHAW MISHRA
      ANUBHAW MISHRA
      19 Feb, 2019

      CDTEST 23406 ANS2comment imagecomment image

        trojan123
        trojan123
        19 Feb, 2019

        hi ANUBHAW MISHRA
        intro is good.
        1st part of body missed main points like connectivity, security aspects…
        2nd part of question has not been answered…what economic transformation of Bangladesh mean for the Subcontinent as a whole.
        conclusion is fine..

        keep writing
        refer to model answer


          lekha_27
          19 Feb, 2019

          CDTEST22496 Ans 3comment image
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            trojan123
            trojan123
            19 Feb, 2019

            hi lekha_27,
            well written answer…
            just ellaborate upon Social Media Communication hub in intro…
            2nd use words like data privacy, examples need to be quoted especially recent incident of facebook
            3rd mention justice BN krishna committe points,
            4th give example of The General Data Protection Regulation (EU)
            shorten your conclusion to accommodate above points

            refer model answer…


              lekha_27
              19 Feb, 2019

              CDTEST22496 Ans 2
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                trojan123
                trojan123
                19 Feb, 2019

                hi lekha_27,
                well articulated answer…
                just add examples as they are missing in many points…
                2ndly, elaborate on point 3 ie regional and global…
                3rdly, private investment aspect missing…

                shorten you conclusion max 4-5 lines…

                refer model answer


                  lekha_27
                  19 Feb, 2019

                  CDTEST22496 Ans 1
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                    trojan123
                    trojan123
                    19 Feb, 2019

                    hi lekha_27,
                    nice answer…
                    improvement-
                    point 1- you can add articles of part 3/4, various facts related to inequality. this add weight to it.
                    point 2- here also you can add articles of part 3/4, give example of growing tendency of surveillance state etc
                    point 3 give examples of recent happenings
                    point 4 give examples

                    keep writing


                      trojan123
                      trojan123
                      19 Feb, 2019

                      hi harsimran kaur,
                      well understanding of question written with contemporary examples…
                      but, points seems to repetitive..please take care of that..
                      rather club 2 parts of body and explain there only..
                      don’t write such long conclusion rather add few more aspects in body..

                        harsimran kaur
                        19 Feb, 2019

                        And am not getting compilations,where is it uploaded on site?

                          harsimran kaur
                          19 Feb, 2019

                          Will take care of it
                          Are you Aspirant or from
                          civils daily team?


                            gk
                            19 Feb, 2019

                            CDTEST22580
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                              trojan123
                              trojan123
                              19 Feb, 2019

                              hi gk
                              it seems you have totally digressed from demand of question…
                              you need to elaborate upon his ideologies and how it is relevant today…

                              refer model answer


                                gk
                                19 Feb, 2019

                                CDTEST22580
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                                  trojan123
                                  trojan123
                                  19 Feb, 2019

                                  hi gk
                                  intro is okay..elaborate upon social media comm. hub.
                                  body
                                  points seems to be repetitive..
                                  missed main points to add weight to answer

                                  just 2 points to cons..add few more points
                                  poor conclusion..

                                  refer to model answer..


                                    gk
                                    19 Feb, 2019

                                    CDTEST22580
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                                      trojan123
                                      trojan123
                                      19 Feb, 2019

                                      hi gk
                                      intro seems to be okay..
                                      body-
                                      1st part need improvement in few points…
                                      2nd part of question is not answered well rather repetition of points which can be clubbed in 1-2 points
                                      don’t write long conclusion to fill pages it will not fetch you mark rather add more aspects in body…

                                      refer model answer


                                        gk
                                        19 Feb, 2019

                                        CDTEST22580
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                                          trojan123
                                          trojan123
                                          19 Feb, 2019

                                          hi @disqus_TIr2Jn1kED:disqus
                                          it seems you have not read previous suggestion…
                                          you are still continuing with your rough answer writing and poor handwriting…

                                          please work on it asap

                                            dhritiman das
                                            19 Feb, 2019

                                            These are answers uploaded before suggestion.i am removing the next answers


                                              Stevie G
                                              Stevie G
                                              19 Feb, 2019

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                                              Answer 2 . Id: CDTEST22553

                                                trojan123
                                                trojan123
                                                19 Feb, 2019

                                                hi Stevie G ,
                                                No need of historical aspect in intro…just give 2-3 line intro
                                                body-
                                                poor structure, haphazard presentation
                                                missed major points..

                                                2nd part of your body is totally out of context to the demand of question. read carefully to meet the demand of question

                                                refer to model answer


                                                  Satyam Akotiya
                                                  Satyam Akotiya
                                                  19 Feb, 2019

                                                  CDTEST22917Q.4comment image comment image


                                                    Satyam Akotiya
                                                    Satyam Akotiya
                                                    19 Feb, 2019

                                                    CDTEST22917
                                                    Q.3comment image comment image

                                                      trojan123
                                                      trojan123
                                                      19 Feb, 2019

                                                      hi Satyam Akotiya
                                                      your intro is poor…
                                                      2ndly please elaborate upon social media communication hub..
                                                      3rdly pros part can be clubbed in just 2 points..don’t repeat by changing words..
                                                      cons part example missing
                                                      not good conclusion…need improvement again repetition

                                                      refer model answer.


                                                        n b
                                                        n b
                                                        19 Feb, 2019

                                                        CDTEST22416comment imagecomment image ANS 3.

                                                          trojan123
                                                          trojan123
                                                          19 Feb, 2019

                                                          hi n b,
                                                          intro seems to be okay..please elaborate on social media communication hub..
                                                          body..
                                                          few points seems to be incomplete…

                                                          others aspects are fine
                                                          refer to model answer


                                                            trojan123
                                                            trojan123
                                                            19 Feb, 2019

                                                            hi Manish yadav
                                                            don’t experiment with your answer writing…despite good points you will not get good marks because of poor presentation…
                                                            2ndly you have missed 2nd part of question..
                                                            rather written which is not demand of question..

                                                            refer model answer