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Hi Anita
– Please upload the answers separately for our ease.
Q4.
– The first part of the answer is really good. Nice discussion on virtue.
– Work is needed in the second part where you discussed five constituents of Confucius concept of perfect virtue. You should have given small sub headings of each constituents and briefly discussed concepts of each of them to make your answer better.
– Work on your presentation.
– Overall decent attempt
Marks: 7/15
Q3.
– Dont start the answer right away. A little bit of intro (why it is in news recently) will add merit to your discussion.
– Explanation needs more clarity regarding block-chain. Whenever a question asks directly regarding any technology, then provide more detailed explanation than the one you gave. Also to enhance your answer, specially in S&T answers, use diagram to explain the technology.
– Good discussion in the advantages of block-chain tech.
– Rest of the answer is fine.
– Highlight the sub headings to make points clear.
– Good conclusion
Marks- 6.5/15
Q2.
– Good intro.
– OK discussion regarding the judgments. Highlight or underline the case names.
– There is no autonomy? Judiciary in India, like other organs, is separate and hence it has autonomy. Avoid such mistakes.
– Way forwards needs more strength. It is general in nature in its current form.
Marks: 6.5/15
Q1.
– Incomplete upload of the answer. The page after intro is perhaps missing. Hence not awarding marks in this.
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CDTEST20319
Hi Imgroot
– Really good intro.
– The quality of the discussion is nice and structure, presentation and content is top notch.
– The only suggestion is that in conclusion you could have briefly added how and why these movements failed to take pan- India shape.
– Apart from that, really good attempt, coupled with amazing handwriting. Keep it up. Keep Writing.
Marks- 8/15
Q3 CD TEST 20392
Hi Sandeep
– Very good explanation of block-chain in the intro.
– Good that you used diagram to drive home your point.
– Discussion in the India’s position (both +ve and -ve) and way forward needs bit more points.
– Very good conclusion.
Marks: 6.5/15
CD TEST 20378
Hi Invincible
– Answer should have intro. In the intro, discuss briefly what was revolutionary movement and what led to its rise. Then proceed to the main body.
– Moderates and extremists discussion is irrelevant in the answer.
– What were the differences between two phases? That was the mandate of the question. You mentioned basic characteristics of the phases but missed out on discussing differences between them.
– See model answer for better understanding. Will time, you will improve.
Marks: 4.5/15
CD TEST 20378
Hi Invincible
– There are certain issues with the answer.
– Intro is good and on expected lines.
– Discussion in the judgments portion needs better framing and presentation. Highlight more important cases of 50s, 60s and 70s rather than focusing mainly on recent judgments. Recent judgments are important but question is regarding protecting constitution and hence cases with relevance should be mentioned.
– The discussion in challenges in SC is more of criticism rather than challenges faced by the SC. Question wants you to discuss those challenges and not the criticism alone.
– You missed to give solutions to those challenges and what steps executive and judiciary both should take in order to make SC work better. It was to be an important part of the answer that you missed.
– Lackluster conclusion.
– Work on your presentation skills.
Marks: 4/15
Q2 Test20392
Hi Sandeep
– Very good intro.
– Good discussion in judgments too. You covered almost all the necessary judgments with good inputs regarding them. Keep it up.
– Good way forwards too.
– Missing conclusion is the only soar point of the answer. End the answer with conclusion. Its an important of your answer. Minus Marks for this error.
– Overall very good attempt.
Marks- 7/15
CDTEST20563 Ans-2
CDTEST20563 Ans-2
Hi Shivani
– While the content of the intro is decent, shorten it and summarize it to make a single and short intro. Right now, its taking full one page.
– Give more judgments in the points. Shorten the intro, give more space to the discussion on the judgments and challenges faced by SC in discharging this duty. This should be your presentation and structure of the answer.
– Good way forward. That’s the gem of of the answer.
– Overall decent attempt but work on your structuring of the answer. Remember, the main body of the answer should take around 75 percent of your space and rest should go to intro and conclusion. Try to finish your answers withing 3 pages.
Marks: 5/15
CDTEST20324, Answer 2 [Sorry for poor answer in advance]
CDTEST20324 Question 2
HI Prafull
– Good intro. Language here is really good.
-In terms of content, structure and presentation, everything is fine.
-Don’t be too critical on government specially with statements like “unsupportive stance” or “misusing loopholes to delay justice”. These statements suits newspaper columns but not UPSC answers. Be little more diplomatic with your wordings.
-Overall nice attempt except the flaw that I pointed out. Keep it up and keep writing.
Marks- 7.5/15
CDTEST20563 Ans-3
Hi Shivani
– Use the second para of the answer as your intro to structure answer in better way.
– Good explanation of block-chain.
– While mentioning the sectors that will be benefited from block-chain, mention how it will help these sectors. Dont write general statements.
– In the discussion “India’s global position in Block-chain” dont start with criticizing efforts of India. First mention what are the areas and sectors where govt and private players have started using block-chain technology to improve their working. For ex Andhra Pradesh, Niti Ayog, Bajaj Automobiles, Yes Bank etc have been using block-chain in their respective areas to improve efficiency. Then jump to your hurdles.
– Hurdles discussion lacks strength and direction. Make it better.
– Solutions seems to be misplaced. These are the solutions which block-chain will provide. Instead you were supposed to provide solutions that India can use to make block-chain ecosystem work better in India. Points like better funding, R&D, skilling etc.
– Conclusion is decent. Good.
– Length is concern as it is exceeding space as well as word limits.
Marks- 4.5/15
CDTEST20563 Ans-1
Hi Shivani
– Answer has no intro. Give points on how revolutionary movement started and what were the failures of national movement that led to revolutionary movement in intro.
– Give names of the leaders of movements in both phases and some examples of their actions.
– Like intro, answer lacks proper conclusion. Work on your structure.
– Limit the word limit. It is exceeding the limit.
Marks- 4.5/15
CDTEST20663
Answer 2
Hi Kapiushon
– While discussion in the first part of the answer is good, but try to give more judgments to score better. In order to do so, curtail the discussion in other points. Right now, you over discussed judgments. Mention the case, give short statements on its importance and jump to the next judgement.
– In the discussion regarding challenges faced by the SC, you discussed some points which are more in the nature of criticism of SC and not challenges per se. Avoid that.
– Good conclusion.
Marks- 6.5/15
CDTEST 20496
Answer 2
Hi Priyadarshi
– Very good intro.
– Do not use statements like “tried to take away the power of legislature to amend the constitution.” Your idea was correct but the execution in terms of sentence was not. It shows SC in bad light.
– Good discussion after that.
– Overall good answer. Would suggest to improve the last parts of the answer to make a bit strong answer than the one it is now.
Marks- 6.5/15
CDTEST 20496
Answer 3
Hi Priyadarshi
– Few suggestions in intro. First of all, do not start the discussion with the word go. Give some background, as in, how block-chain is in news and how it is the most sought after technology right now in the world. Then jump to the discussion on explanation of block-chain.
– Coming to your explanation in the first paragraph, right now it is quite small and lacks strength. In that short paragraph, one cannot explain block-chain, hence more points are needed. To score better, you could use diagram to explain the process of block-chain.
– Very good discussion after that till concerns portion. The points are well covered and explained. Specially the discussion regarding India and Block-chain.
– First point of the concern regarding block-chain in India (nascent technology) is contradictory to your earlier discussion of benefits of block-chain. How can something be secure in earlier part of the answer and then become insecure in other part of the answer. Avoid such mistakes.
– After this, the rest of the answer is fine.
-Overall good answer. Work on your presentation skills and intro of the answer to get better marks.
Marks- 6/15
CDTEST20663
Answer 3
Hi Kapiushon
– Though the description of block-chain is really good, but a little bit of more intro (why it is in news recently) will add merit to your discussion.
– While providing points in UPSC answers, dont just mention names or points but mention their cause and actions too. What I mean, while you wrote that block-chain will help telecom sector, do mention HOW it will help the sector like you did with all other sectors. It will convert a general statement into a solid one and will make your answer strong. Try to do this with all other answers too. Give actions too. Dont over-explain. Just mention the steps that will improve the working etc.
– More points are needed in achievements in block-chain in India section.
– The last page is wrongly uploaded. I guess it is from SC answer. Try to upload correct pages for everyone’s ease.
– The direction of the answer till page 2 was good and content was decent, hence marking on these 2 pages.
Marks: 7/15
sorry for the glitch in last page…i have updated it…
Please suggest on how to deal with the question where subtopics involved and content avialable is too much such as this one… More points are to be covered or less point with more analysis is to be done
Thanks for the review..
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