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- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/ narendra-modi-arab-gulf- countries-middle-east- relations-c-raja-mohan- 6558876/ - In the intro, mention the importance of Arab countries for India.
- In the body, mention the geopolitical orientation going on and threat to the sovereignty of these countries- like an alliance of Iran Turkey Malaysia and Qatar and the role of the U.S. Russia and China.
- In the role India could play mention facilitating relation between these countries and other countries, non-interference in their decision making, opposing the interference by the external powers in these countries etc.
- Conclude by mentioning the importance of stability and sovereignty of these countries for India.
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Hi Atif
Lackluster introduction, mention the importance of Arab countries for India.
You have explained the threats in a decent manner.
Give headings properly. It should be role of India not role for India.
Improve your handwriting and avoid using short forms.
Work on content, read comprehensively to enrich it.
Good conclusion.
Work on presentation to fetch better marks.
Keep working hard.