Mentor’s Comments-
- Briefly give an overview of the Aluminium industry in India.
- Explain the factors influencing the location of the Aluminium industry in India.
- Briefly highlight its importance.
- Conclude the answer on the basis of the above points.
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Mentor’s Comments-
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Alka
Good attempt.
Introduction is fine.
Factors influencing are also well written. Further, you can mention points such as connectivity(road-rail network), favourable government policies for e.g. Odisha govt.
Also try to mention more examples. NALCO can be mentioned as plant near raw material source(koraput), Hindalco- connectivity, Vedanta uses captive power plants in Chattisgarh for electricity.
It will be nice if you can draw a rough India map showing aluminum industry locations.
Importance part is also fine, but properties of aluminum can all be included in one point, broader points such as creation of employment opportunities, strategic significance etc can also be incorporated.
Conclusion is fine.
Keep practicing. 🙂