Critically examine the motives behind British efforts towards the expansion of modern education system. 10 marks

Hi Divya
Good intro.
Motives are discussed in a good manner, try giving subheadings for better presentation.
Content wise good attempt, need to work more on presentation.
Write in straight lines.
Good structure.
Overall a good attempt.
Keep working hard.

Hi Deepika
Good intro.
Motives and impact are discussed in a decent manner,.
Good conclusion.
Try giving subheadings.
Good structure.
A good attempt, keep working hard.