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- https://www.thehindu.com/
opinion/lead/a-global-order- caught-up-in-a-swirl-of-chaos/ article65682489.ece - In the intro, mention that the Ukraine crisis has intensified the concerns of countries in the Indo-Pacific.
- In the body mention that growing closeness between China-Russia and assertive behaviour of China has heightened the concerns in the region. The US has responded to the situation through AUKUS and Quad, Partners in the Blue Pacific etc. However, the region lacks the unity of purpose and reluctance to take side in the conflict.
- Conclude by mentioning that apart from the Ukraine crisis there are many significant changes taking place on the global stage.
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Saradha
Write an introduction first of all- you can mention that the Ukraine crisis has intensified the concerns of countries in the Indo-Pacific.
Next two parts about growing Chinese influence in the region and bonhomie with Russia are well written. You have mentioned some good points.
After that, you don’t need to write in detail about other global changes. Not asked.
Rather, you can mention the response of other countries like US and India via the AUKUS and Quad, Partners in the Blue Pacific etc.
Next mention the dilemma for smaller countries in the region as most of them tacitly approve of the military presence of US but at the same time their economies are heavily interlinked with China.
In conclusion, you can give a passing mention to other global issues and say that there are many emerging challenges to deal with.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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Athira
You have written pretty well.
Almost all angles are covered.
Introduction is good, aggressive behaviour of China along with growing Russia-China bonhomie has been highlighted.
Rather than mentioning your subheading as challenges of US for the next part, you can frame it as response of US and other like-minded countries.
Next, mention the dilemma for smaller countries in the region as most of them tacitly approve of the military presence of US but at the same time their economies are heavily interlinked with China.
Conclusion is fine.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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Hello
Introduction is fine.
You need to back your answer with facts and events.
Scholar’s views are just post-analysis.
For example, mention how is China increasing its influence in the region- assertiveness in South China Sea, security deal with Solomon islands, confrontation with Japan, comprehensive framework with PIC countries.
Then, some points regarding Russia-China bonhomie in recent times can be mentioned such as no support for sanctions against Russia, connectivity initiatives like Power of Siberia etc
In response, mention of Quad is good, initiatives like AUKUS and partners in the Blue Pacific can also be mentioned.
Dilemma for smaller countries in the region as most of them tacitly approve of the military presence of US but at the same time their economies are heavily interlinked with China can be talked about too.
Keep practicing. 🙂