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- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/to- check-stubble-burning-monitor- policy-implementation-7661478/ - In the intro, mention the issue of air quality faced by Delhi in winter.
- In the body, mention the initiatives such as National Policy for Management of Crop Residue, Promotion of Agricultural Mechanisation for In-Situ Management of Crop Residue, banning of stubble burning by NGT, and legal provision etc.
- In the way forward mention subsiding the operational costs and monitoring of the policy implementation.
- Conclude by mentioning the need for a combination of measures to deal with the problem.
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Bhanu
Decent attempt. Introduction is fine, after that you can mention briefly causes of increased stubble burning, recent government announcement decriminalising stubble burning(use flowchart).
Next part is fine, custom hiring centres, scheme names(Agricultural Mechanisation for In-Situ Management of Crop Residue) can be mentioned. Other points are fine. GRAP is not exactly for stubble burning..you can avoid.
In next part, mention some new ideas that can be implemented- economic incentive is good (providing farmers a capital subsidy on such equipment), mention robust monitoring system along with it, ex-situ management of crop residue,targeted and cluster-based approach can be undertaken by identifying districts can be written.
Conclusion is good, keep practicing..read the article mentioned above for content-building. 🙂
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Ishan
Please mention reference ID.
Your answer looks like an essay, improve presentation…use subheadings, flowcharts, underline points to make ti more presentable.
In intro, it seems you are writing in favour of stubble burning..mention deteriorating air quality, stubble burning an important factor and move on..keep it short and precise.
Points mentioned by you are fine in next part, however mention schemes like National Policy for Management of Crop Residue, Promotion of Agricultural Mechanisation for In-Situ Management of Crop Residue along with it.
Again you need to mention a proper way forward..it has been exclusively asked..considering subsidising operational costs along with providing farmers a capital subsidy on such equipment, Ex-situ management of crop residue(3rd point relates to this, use keywords),targeted and cluster-based approach can be undertaken by identifying districts, robust monitoring system etc can be mentioned.
Keep practicing, read other answers and the article tagged above for content-building. 🙂
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Nandhini
Intro is good..mention briefly some reasons for increase in stubble burning after that..recent announcement decriminalising stubble burning can be mentioned too.
Next part is good..you have written well. Some steps taken by state governments can also be mentioned.
In way forward mention some new ideas- steps mentioned by you have already been taken without much success..cooperative farming is good.
Considering subsidising operational costs along with providing farmers a capital subsidy on such equipment, Ex-situ management of crop residue(3rd point relates to this, use keywords),targeted and cluster-based approach can be undertaken by identifying districts, robust monitoring system etc can be mentioned.
Conclusion is fine, keep practicing. 🙂
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Muskan
Introduction is good, use of flowchart is also nice. In government steps, in first point you have contradicted yourself..anyway according to recent government announcement stubble burning has been decriminalised.
Mention some central government steps- custom hiring centres, promotion of Agricultural Mechanisation for In-Situ Management of Crop Residue, making biomass pellets mandatory in some coal-fired thermal power plants etc. Steps mentioned by you, taken by state governments are good too.
In the next part, you can mention some new ideas- considering subsidising operational costs along with providing farmers a capital subsidy on such equipment, Ex-situ management of crop residue(3rd point relates to this, use keywords),targeted and cluster-based approach can be undertaken by identifying districts, robust monitoring system etc
Conclusion is fine.
Keep practicing. 🙂