Mentor’s comment-
- https://www.thehindu.com/
opinion/lead/in-border-claims- reimagining-south-asias- boundaries/article31940545.ece - In the intro, you can briefly mention what do you mean by the political and economic union.
- In the body, you can mention why it is the “most natural” regional grouping- from the cultural, geographical, historical point of view. In the next part factors that stand in the regional integration has to be mentioned- these are security issues, India-Pak rivalry, lack of leadership, competing for the same commodities etc.
- Conclude by stressing the need for working toward the regional unity by overcoming the challenges.
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Hi Taran
Good introduction.
Use subheadings in a same format,for example- cultural and historical not culture and historical.
Try to update your content with current affairs. For example in this question you can mention about kalapani dispute.
Brainstorm before writing,think various aspects of the same question.
Briefly mention what will be the impact of cooperation on lives of south asian people.
Work on content.
Improve handwriting and underline important stuff to get better marks.
Keep writing!
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Hi Dakshina
Good introduction.
Content is decent and well placed.
But you can add some ethical concerns to diversify your answer like you can write in conclusion that territorial boundaries should not be valued more than lives, livelihoods and the well-being of the people located at the edges of nation states, so there is urgent need of cooperation.
Add impact of cooperation in a different subheading then conclude.
Work on handwriting.
Overall good attempt.
Keep it up.
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Hi Kritika
In introduction write about South asian countries political and economic union.
Use subheadings like cultural ,geographical etc to make your answer better structured.
Mention how these disputes terribly affect the lives of people who live on borders.
And what will be the impact of cooperation on them.
Read the newspaper article link given in the mentor’s comment ,it will help you in adding dimensions to your answer.
Do not use short forms .
Conclusion is good.
Work hard ,you will improve.
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Hi Deepika
Good introduction.
Give examples when you write how countries are connected to each other. Like you can add Buddhism, Ramayana ,same religion, countries were colonized by same power etc.
In disputes, you did not mention the territorial disputes , brainstorm before writing.
Mention briefly what will be the impact of cooperation then conclude.
Your conclusion is good.
Understand the demand of the question ,think of various aspects then write.
You can do much better, so work hard ,you will improve.
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Hi Chester
Before writing the disputed issues,write how south-asian region is connected.
You can draw a diagram for better marks,refer NJ diagram to take a hint.
It is India not Indias ,you have written Indias 2-3 times.
You did not mention any way forward or suggestions how things can be improved.
Your answer is very general,improve it,diversify it to get better marks.
Read mentor’s comment before writing the answer,it will help you.
Write the impact of cooperation on south asian countries.
Then conclude.
Work hard,you will improve.
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Hi Parakh
You did not understand the demand of the question.
Read mentor’s comment before writing.
Mention how these countries are united via cultural, historical and religious similarities.
Then mention what are the issues and disputes ,then write some way forward and the impact of cooperation on south asian people,then conclude.
Brainstorm before writing.
Plan a structure before writing,then write.
Map diagram is appreciable but work on content.
Work hard ,you will improve.
Pls review it