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- In the introduction you can briefly discuss the importance of globalization and its implications in general.
- In the body explain how globalization impacted Indian urban and rural society with both positive as well as negative impacts. Also explain how urban and rural India are mutually interdependent and both have a greater impact of globalization. Elucidate that globalization is a complex phenomenon and as a result globalization has shown remarkable growth in urbanization and rural development.
- You can conclude with a positive note that globalization has proved to be an empowering entity in Indian scenario.
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Hi Taran
Rephrase your introduction.
You have mentioned the impacts of globalization but did not explain them,always try to explain in one or two lines.
Learn managing the space,if you are giving small points then make a table or a flow chart.
Add dimensions to your answer,
Write various impacts like in positives you can add expansion of agro-industries, increased mechanization and better inputs, rapid Digitization etc and in negatives you can add McDonaldization, rise in lifestyle diseases etc.
Avoid grammatical errors.
Underline keywords.
Keep writing,you will improve.
Hi @Parth Verma sir,
I have one small query that it was a question of 150 words and I could have added more dimensions but the world limit restricted me. So how do deal with such questions where there is plenty to write but within world limit?
You can write in brief,for example you could have written the implications in short because that is not the main demand of the question. Use of flow chart/table will help you in covering other aspects too in the given word limit.
@Parth Verma Thanks for the suggestions. Just one more thing correct me if i am wrong but after the reading the question ..i understood that impacts are the main demand of the question.
Yes impact is the main demand not implications , so write implications in short or merge them in introduction only.
You can take a clue from Kritika kature’s flow chart.
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Hi Kritika
Good introduction.
Use of flow chart for describing +ve and -ve is appreciable.
Content is well placed and diversified.
Well structured answer.
Avoid using short forms .
Improve spellings.
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A decent attempt.
Keep it up !
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Hi Dakshina
Rephrase your introduction.
You have written quite general effects of globalization,
The question is demanding the effects on Indian society so focus on that.
Cover more verticals of India society like in urban negatives you can write urban sprawl,rise in lifestyle diseases , declining family values etc and in positives you can write better lifestyle,increased urbanization , socio-economic development etc.
Try to understand the basic demand of the question.
Improve your basic grammar .
Need to work on handwriting also.
Conclusion is good.
Work hard,you will succeed.
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Hi NJ
Rephrase your introduction.
In the impact on urban society, you have mentioned the use of suit and tie, write more solid points like McDonaldization, rise in lifestyle diseases,declining marriage values etc.
Work on space management,you can use a flow chart or make a table to save your space.
Follow a proper structure, first write about the urban society- negatives and positives then come to rural society.
Do not write in a haphazard way.
Work on content.
Lackluster conclusion,conclude with a positive note that globalization has proved to be an empowering entity in Indian scenario.
Keep writing !
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Hi Deepika
Good introduction.
You have present the impacts in a decent manner.
The content is diverse and condensed,keep it up.
Good conclusion.
The structure of answer is decent.
Overall a good attempt.
Persistence is the key to success,keep writing,you will succeed.
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Hi Chester
Lackluster introduction,first define what is globalization then briefly discuss the importance of globalization and its implications in general.
You have explained the impact in a decent manner.
Instead of writing impact on village, write impact on rural India.
Good conclusion.
Overall a decent attempt.
Work on basic grammar and improve presentation.
Keep writing,you will succeed.
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Hi Aastha
Along with the definition of globalization,write its implications in general.
The content is good in the impact part.
Your answer looks monotonous, use some flow chart or make a table etc.
Work on presentation to get better marks.
Concluding remarks are decent.
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Hi Parakh
First define what globalisation is, then write its implications.
Use proper headings and subheadings to present your answer in a better form.
For example in this question, simply use effects on urban society-write negative and positive under different subheadings.
Avoid drawing a line in between of the answer
Underline only keywords.
Work on structure to get better marks.
Improve your handwriting.
Good conclusion.
Work hard,you will succeed.
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Hi Vikrant
Scan your answer sheet in proper light.
Lackluster introduction,briefly discuss the importance of globalization and its implications in general.
Use proper headings and subheadings.
For example instead of writing let us see the impact… you can simply give the heading impact on urban society,it will save you space as well as will make your answer more presentable.
Impact part is well explained.
Work on handwriting and give a proper structure to your answer to get better marks.
Keep writing,you will improve.