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- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/ importing-a-failed-experiment- 6608192/ - In the intro, mention what social stock exchange is.
- In the body, discuss the various aspects of the idea of social exchange and how it could help the social sector.
- Conclude by stating the need to explore the accommodation of the exchange with the presence of civil society in the country.
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Hi Samiksha
Good introduction, also mention that it works under SEBI.
You have explained the benefits of SSE in a decent manner.
Leave some space between the paragraphs.
After concerns , write way forward also.
You can write that it is required to have an extensive and cautious approach in terms of its accreditation, valuation and monitoring.
Good conclusion.
Try to add more dimensions to fetch better marks.
Overall a good attempt.
Keep writing !