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- In the introduction briefly define the concept of Propaganda and Cult leadership.
- In the body you can discuss the following in detail- Narrate the backdrop of the rise of Nazi culture, Use of techniques of propaganda—that include strong images and simple messages, discuss how Nazi propaganda idolized Hitler as a gifted statesman who brought stability, created jobs, and restored German greatness. Discuss the role of personality cults of political leaders.
- Conclude with what needs to be done with respect to propaganda and cult leadership; how to keep the two in check so as to have a world with peace and harmony.
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Hi Taran
In the introduction, explain how propaganda word arises due to Nazi Party.
Then briefly explain the backdrop of rise of Nazi culture.
You can mention how “Aryan” people were bonded by their innermost disposition as a organic community.
Then write the use of techniques of propaganda.
You can also write about the role of personality cult of leaders.
Give examples of Xi Jinping and North Korea also .
Try to understand the demand of the question.
You have written a general answer.
Work on basic grammar and handwriting.
Work hard !
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Hi Deepika
Good introduction.
Briefly explain the backdrop of rise of Nazi culture.
You can mention how “Aryan” people were bonded by their innermost disposition as a organic community.
You have explained the tools used by the cult leaders in a decent manner.
Also write about the role of personality cult of leaders, give examples of present time leaders like Xi Jinping and North Korea.
Thumbs up for conclusion.
Avoid scribbling while writing.
Keep working hard.
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Hi Nj
Question is directly demanding that comment with reference to Nazism in Germany, so in the introduction, explain how propaganda word arises due to Nazi Party.
You have explained the cult leadership in a good manner but also write about the role of personality cult of leaders, give examples of present time leaders like Xi Jinping and North Korea.
Lackluster conclusion,you can write like this that there is a need to do a check on such rhetorics to maintain peace and harmony.
Always conclude with some suggestion or how things can be improved.
Work on grammar.
Keep writing.
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Hi Chester
Good introduction but need to rephrase it(grammatical errors).
Your introduction is looking long so use proper heading or subheading after introduction.
Mention briefly the use of techniques of propaganda.
Cult leaders do not always lead to disaster, so avoid using such extreme thoughts.
You can write about the role of personality cult of leaders, give examples of present time leaders like Xi Jinping and North Korea.
Be neutral while writing,everything has pros and cons.
Conclusion is good.
Work on basic grammar and handwriting.
Keep writing.
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Hi Dakshina
You have mentioned in the introduction the consequences of propaganda and cult leadership, instead in the introduction, explain how propaganda and cult leadership arises due to Nazi Party.
Use of flow chart is appreciable.
Rest of the answer is according to the demand of the question,keep it up.
You have use the subheadings wisely.
Conclusion should not be about democracy,it should be like what we learnt from the past and how to improve the things.
Work on presentation and handwriting,write neat and legible.
Overall a decent attempt.
Keep writing.
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Hi NS
In the introduction, explain how propaganda word arises due to Nazi Party.
Then briefly explain the backdrop of rise of Nazi culture.
Your answer looks monotonous, work on presentation, write in points to refrain monotony.
Adhere to the demand of the question.
Write about the role of personality cult of leaders, give examples of present time leaders like Xi Jinping and North Korea.
Conclude with what needs to be done with respect to propaganda and cult leadership.
Avoid using unnecessary capital alphabets in between of a sentence.
Give your answer a proper structure to get better marks.
Work hard,you will improve.
Please review
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Hi Vinay
Question is directly demanding that comment with reference to Nazism in Germany, so in the introduction, explain how propaganda word arises due to Nazi Party.
You have mentioned in the entire answer that how propaganda and cult leadership helped Hitler,write that in brief because you other aspects also to cover.
Brainstorm before writing.
Write about the role of personality cult of leaders, give examples of present time leaders like Xi Jinping and North korea.
Conclusion is good.
Work hard on diversification of content.
Keep writing.
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@Parth Verma Sir, please review.
Hi Shubham
Good Introduction.
Your answer is looking monotonous, give some headings and subheadings for better presentation.
Content is good.
Also write about the role of personality cult of leaders and their tools and techniques.
You have given the examples in a decent manner.
Avoid using short forms like &.
Work on basic grammar.
Improve handwriting to get better marks.
Conclusion is good.
A decent attempt.
Keep writing.