Mentor’s comment-
- https://www.thehindu.com/
opinion/op-ed/the-problem-of- ageing-dams/article33711348. ece - In the intro, mention some figures about the age of major dams in India.
- In the body, mention the challenges posed by the ageing of dams- the threat to water security, the threat to farmers’ income, challenges to climate change adaptations etc. In the measure, mention desilting of dams, use of water conservation techniques in the agriculture, use of techniques to prevent erosion in the watershed to reduce siltation in dams etc.
- Conclude by mentioning the need to identify the treats posed by the ageing dams and take the appropriate steps.
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Hi Kanchi
Good intro.
You can also quote some report like according to a United Nations (UN) report “Ageing water infrastructure: An emerging global risk”, over 1,000 large dams in India will be roughly 50 years old in 2025 and such ageing embankments across the world pose a growing threat.
Challenges and measures are discussed in a good manner.
Briefly write the impact also.
Overall a good attempt.
Keep working hard.
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Hi Zulu
Thumbs up for the intro.
Challenges are discussed in a decent manner.
Breifly write the impact also like frequent flood, impact on groundwater etc.
Good suggested strtegy.
Good strucutre.
A good attempt.
Keep working hard.
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Hi Bhupender
Good intro.
You can also quote some report like according to a United Nations (UN) report “Ageing water infrastructure: An emerging global risk”, over 1,000 large dams in India will be roughly 50 years old in 2025 and such ageing embankments across the world pose a growing threat.
After the intro, try to give a heading.
Challenges and measures are discussed in a good manner.
Good content, work more on presentation.
Leave proper space between the paragraphs.
Start the sentence with capital alphabet.
Hi Jaya
Please scan your sheet in proper light.
Good intro.
You can also quote some report like according to a United Nations (UN) report “Ageing water infrastructure: An emerging global risk”, over 1,000 large dams in India will be roughly 50 years old in 2025 and such ageing embankments across the world pose a growing threat.
Challenges and measures are discussed in a good manner.
Good conclusion.
Keep working hard.