Mentor’s comment-
- In the introduction briefly explain what you understand by regionalism.
- In the body explain the ideology of regionalism and how political movement seeks to advance the causes of regions.Briefly mention the types of regionalism and their positive as well as negative impact on society,polity, diplomacy, economy, security, culture, development, negotiations, etc. Highlight its impact on the Indian polity.
- Conclude with what should be the way forward.
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Hi Uttam
Lackluster introduction, define regionalism properly.
Its economic not economical.
WTO , NATO, IMF are the international organisations , not the examples of regionalism.
Brainstorm before writing.
You have deviated from the demand of the question, how regional provides financial assistance and curb illegal activities ?
Regionalism is a feeling or an ideology among a section of people residing in a particular
geographical space characterized by unique language, culture etc., elaborate this .
Read mentor’s comment before writing.
Improve handwriting.
Keep writing, you will improve.
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Hi Shubham
Good introduction.
Before writing the positives and negatives, explain briefly the regionalism in India.
Some good points but need to add more points.
In the negatives , you can write – tension between centre and states, formation of regional parties etc. And in positives,you can add that it helps in affirming the identity of tribal groups.
Write some measures then conclude.
In the measures , you can write-
-Activities of the separatists should be dealt with strongly
-Establishment of Autonomous Commissions to settle Inter-State Disputes
-Balanced Division of Powers between Centre and the States
-Development of Secular Politics
Good conclusion.
Work hard, you will improve.
OK, Sir.
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Hi Taran
Rephrase your introduction.
Avoid spelling mistakes.
Adhere to the demand of the question and write crisp and concise.
For example, you have written the types of regionalism, that is not the main demand of the question, use a flow chart for that, then simply define regionalism in India, positives and negatives, measures then conclude.
Follow a proper structure.
You have explained the positives and negatives of regionalism in a decent manner but explain the suggested strategy in a proper manner.
In the measures , you can write-
-Activities of the separatists should be dealt with strongly
-Establishment of Autonomous Commissions to settle Inter-State Disputes
-Balanced Division of Powers between Centre and the States
-Development of Secular Politics
Conclusion is missing.
Work on presentation to get better marks.
Keep writing, you will improve.
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Hi Dakshina
First define regionalism then explain the Indian context.
Your heading ‘strategy of regionalism’ does not make sense, work on it.
You have explained the impacts of regionalism in a good manner.
Way forward is missing.
In the measures , you can write-
-Activities of the separatists should be dealt with strongly
-Establishment of Autonomous Commissions to settle Inter-State Disputes
-Balanced Division of Powers between Centre and the States
-Development of Secular Politics.
Lackluster conclusion, write what should be done for an inclusive India.
Work hard, you will improve.
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Hi Parakh
Good introduction.
Thumbs up for the structure of the question.
You have explained the impact of regionalism in a decent manner.
Some good points in the way forward but need to add more comprehensive points like –
-Proper organization of Regional Parties
-Efforts for the balance progress of different states
-Activities of the separatists should be dealt with strongly.
Good conclusion.
Overall a decent attempt.
Work on handwriting.
Keep working hard, you will succeed.
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Hi PSR
Good introduction.
Write crisp and concise, you have explained the dimensions of regionalism in one page, summarize it so that you can cover more aspects in the given word limit.
You have explained the merits and demerits in a decent manner.
Lack of content in the way forward, you can write-
-Activities of the separatists should be dealt with strongly
-Establishment of Autonomous Commissions to settle Inter-State Disputes
-Balanced Division of Powers between Centre and the States
-Development of Secular Politics
Conclusion is missing, conclude by highlighting the importance of ‘one India’.
Underline keywords.
Keep writing !
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Amazing answer! I read your answers because you cover almost all points possible. However, I wanted to ask you if you write in a time limit? Because your definition itself is more than 50 words for a question with word limit of 150.
I’m just asking because I’ve only recently started writing answers and there is no way in a million years that I can write an answer like that in exam setting.
Hey,
So this is not the first time I’m writing an answer on the topic ‘Regionalism’ so I didn’t have to think a lot before writing. That probably helped with the speed.
Nevertheless, I took around 9-10 minutes. And I realise that’s not a competitive speed.
My understanding is:
1. Work on format
2. Built on content.
3. Speed will come with practise.
Thanks Sneha for replying. Even 9-10 minutes is commendable. I really need to work on my speed. Maybe writing on the same topic helps in thought process.
Hi Sneha
Content is good in the introduction but need to summarise it.
Write manifestation in brief then write about the regionalism in India.
You have explained the impacts in a decent manner.
Some good points in the way forward but need to add more.
You can write-
-Activities of the separatists should be dealt with strongly
-Establishment of Autonomous Commissions to settle Inter-State Disputes
-Balanced Division of Powers between Centre and the States
-Development of Secular Politics
Overall a good attempt.
Write ‘and’ instead of &.
Keep working hard.
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Hi Deepika
Good introduction.
You have explained the types and impacts in a decent manner but need to work upon space management, as there is no space left n your sheet for way forward/measures.
Always write some way forward to get better marks.
You can write-
-Activities of the separatists should be dealt with strongly
-Establishment of Autonomous Commissions to settle Inter-State Disputes
-Balanced Division of Powers between Centre and the States
-Development of Secular Politics
Good conclusion.
A decent attempt.
Keep writing !
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Hi Sushmitha
Lackluster introduction, define properly what regionalism is.
Love for religion is not regionalism.
How regionalism can do overall development of a country when it is confined to a region only ?
Brainstorm before writing.
In the negatives , you can write – tension between centre and states, formation of regional parties etc. And in positives,you can add that it helps in affirming the identity of tribal groups.
Write some measures then conclude.
In the measures , you can write-
-Activities of the separatists should be dealt with strongly
-Establishment of Autonomous Commissions to settle Inter-State Disputes
-Balanced Division of Powers between Centre and the States
-Development of Secular Politics
Work on content, read comprehensively to enrich it.
Work hard, you will improve.
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Hi Mehul
Rephrase your introduction.
The question is not asking the types of movements, adhere to the demand of the question.
You have explained the impact of regionalism in a good manner.
Way forward is well explained.
Conclusion is missing.
Work on handwriting.
Avoid grammatical errors and spelling mistakes.
Keep writing, you will succeed.
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Hi PS
Good introduction.
You have explained the impacts in a comprehensive manner, keep it up.
Need to work upon space management, as there is no space left in your sheet for way forward/measures.
Always write some way forward to get better marks.
You can write-
-Activities of the separatists should be dealt with strongly
-Establishment of Autonomous Commissions to settle Inter-State Disputes
-Balanced Division of Powers between Centre and the States
-Development of Secular Politics
Good conclusion.
A decent attempt.
Keep writing , you will succeed.
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Hi Chester
Good introduction.
After the introduction, briefly explain the regionalism types and regionalism in India.
Positive and negative impacts are well explained.
Way forward is missing, always try to give some way forward.
You can write-
-Activities of the separatists should be dealt with strongly
-Establishment of Autonomous Commissions to settle Inter-State Disputes
-Balanced Division of Powers between Centre and the States
-Development of Secular Politics
Good conclusion.
Avoid grammatical errors.
Overall you are improving, keep writing !
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Hi Anu
Good introduction but some grammatical errors.
You have explained the positives and negatives in a decent manner.
Along with government steps, mention what should be done.
Give some way forward.
You can write-
-Activities of the separatists should be dealt with strongly
-Establishment of Autonomous Commissions to settle Inter-State Disputes
-Balanced Division of Powers between Centre and the States
-Development of Secular Politics
Good conclusion.
Avoid grammatical errors.
Overall a decent attempt.
Keep writing !