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- In the introduction define what sustainable urbanisation is.
- In the answer body explain what are problems associated with urban sustainability. Explain how does urbanization affect the sustainability. Discuss the problems associated with urbanization.
Elaborate upon the various government schemes to address the challenges arising in the way of urbanization. - Conclude with way forward.
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Hi Vaidehi
First thing, refrain from monotonous answer.
Write in points and give proper headings and subheadings.
You can take a clue from the Komal’s answer.
Content is there but it is like article from newspaper.
Work on presentation.
Underline keywords and leave space between the paragraphs.
Work hard, you will succeed.
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Hi Komal
Good intro.
You havediscussed the problems with urbanisation in a good manner, also cover the economic prospects- lack of investments etc.
Government initiatives are discussed in a decent manner.
In the way forward mention thaat India needs to work on achieving the goals set by United Nations under SDG-11 to be achieved by 2030.
Content wise good attempt.
Good presentation.
Adhere to word limit.
Keep working hard.
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Hi Surya
Good intro.
Issues are discussed in a decent manner, you can also add-
-Lack of public awareness.
– Weak gender perspective in development.
Government steps are discussed in a decent manner.
In the way forward, mention that –
1.India needs to work on achieving the goals set by United Nations under SDG-11 to be
achieved by 2030.
2. Need for Comprehensive National urban plan for effective and timely implementation of
policies and schemes.
Good conclusion.
@Parth
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@Parth
Please review.
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