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- https://www.thehindu.com/
opinion/lead/a-world-in-chaos- and-a-moment-of-truth/ article33135671.ece - In the intro, mention the context of controversial U.S. presidential elections.
- In the body, examine various forms of threat like deep division among people in the U.S. and how it is harming the democracy there, by raising the doubt over the election process, in case of Europe Brexit shook the foundation of EU, Hungary and Polland challenges the ideas embraced by EU. In the next part, mention the use of terrorism to subvert democracy.
- Conclude by mentioning the need for tackling these challenges through reinforcing trust in the democratic process and forming the fostering international cooperation.
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Hi Geetanjali
Good introduction but try to summarise it in a single paragraph.
Your answer is looking monotonous, use proper heaidngs and subheadings to present your answer in a better structured manner.
Underline keywords.
Give examples also , like you can write about GUPKAR ALLIANCE .
Content wise good attempt.
Avoid using unnecessary capital alphabets in between of a sentence.
Try to write all four question on regular basis.
Work hard, you will succeed.
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Hi Sagar
Mention your payment id.
Good introduction but try to summarise it in a single paragraph.
You have discussed the threats in a comprehensive manner, keep it up.
In the suggested strategy, instead of writing bullet points, summarise them in one-two lines each.
Good conclusion.
Work on presentation to get better marks.
Underline keywords and improve your handwriting !
Avoid using short forms.
Try to write more questions.
Keep writing, you will improve.