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- In the introduction briefly define what Earthquakes are.
- In the body start with geomorphological effects that an earthquake possibly causes. Discuss the impact of it. Use diagrams wherever possible to add value to your answer.
- Conclude with significance.
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Hi Deepika
Good introduction.
Write your geomorphological effects under two subheadings- primary (e.g. subsidence, surface faulting) and secondary effects (displaced rocks, tsunami, ground cracks, liquefactions, landslides).
This thing will make your answer more structured.
Your content is good and diverse.
Impacts of earthquake are well explained.
Use of diagrams is appreciable.
Good conclusion.
Keep writing !
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Hi Taran
Lackluster introduction. you can write that earthquake is one of the most devastating natural calamities which causes sudden shaking of the earth surface.
Explain the effects in some detail, do not write only bullet points, or you can write your geomorphological effects under two subheadings- primary (e.g. subsidence, surface faulting) and secondary effects (displaced rocks, tsunami, ground cracks, liquefactions, landslides).
Impacts are explained in a good manner.
Rest of the content is good.
Work on sentence formation.
Avoid grammatical errors.
Keep writing !
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Hi Dakshina
Good introduction.
You have explained the effects of earthquake in decent manner but you can write them under two subheadings- primary (e.g. subsidence, surface faulting) and secondary effects (displaced rocks, tsunami, ground cracks, liquefaction, landslides). This will make your answer better structured.
Impacts are explained in a good manner.
Good conclusion.
Use of these many diagrams is really good.
A decent attempt.
Keep writing.
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Hi Parakh
Do not write the factors in the introduction, briefly define what Earthquakes are.
In the effects, along with other points, write about subsidence and surface faulting.
You can make a diagram for these two.
Rest of the content is good and well placed.
Good conclusion.
Use of diagrams will help you in getting good marks.
Work on your handwriting, write neat and legible.
A decent attempt.
Keep writing !
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Hi Uttam
Content is good but need to rephrase your introduction.
Explain the effects in some detail, do not write only bullet points, or you can write the geomorphological effects under two subheadings- primary (e.g. subsidence, surface faulting) and secondary effects (displaced rocks, tsunami, ground cracks, liquefaction, landslides).
Impacts are well explained but try not to write bullet points, explain them in one or two lines.
Good conclusion.
Avoid grammatical errors, start your sentence with capital alphabet.
Keep working hard.
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Hi Chester
Earthquake is not an outcome of collapsing landscape, write proper introduction.
Use proper headings and subheadings to present your answer in a better way.
For example, you can write- ‘geomorphological effects caused by an earth quake’.
The content is good and diverse.
Use of flow chart and diagrams will help you in fetching good marks.
Good conclusion.
Avoid grammatical errors.
Keep writing, you will succeed.
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Hi PS
Good introduction.
You have made the world map really good.
You have explained the effects in a diverse manner but try to writer them under two subheadings- primary (e.g. subsidence, surface faulting) and secondary effects (displaced rocks, tsunami, ground cracks, liquefaction, landslides).
Impacts are well explained.
Your content is quite comprehensive, keep it up.
Avoid using short forms.
Keep writing, you will succeed.