Do you think Article 35A should be abolished? Critically comment. (150W/10M)

Mentor’s Comment:

The question is very much in trending now a day and is much in debate. The approach of this question is simple, however, the question demands criticism hence, the one need to criticize whatever the points is being mentioned.

First and foremost is the introduction. It should mention about the article 35A, the way it was included, the motive of incorporating in constitution then.

Further, mention the points supporting its abrogation. Bring example to support your points. Here you can talk about the discrimination done to women who marries the person outside of the state. How it prevents in acquiring land ownership even in matters of setting industries and corporations.

Further mention the points in support of keeping intact this provision of constitution.

A balanced conclusion is must. Conclusion is writing like a third person and hence and not involved in any side taking biased decision.

Model Answer:

Introduction:

  • Article35A of Indian Constitution provides special powers to the state of Jammu and Kashmir legislature in respect of granting citizenship rights to any Indian or a group of Indians. It empowers the state legislature to define the classes of persons who are, or shall be permanent resident(s); gives special rights and privileges or imposes restrictions in matters or availing state facilities.
  • The provision of this article has been in controversy recently because of its discriminatory and biased nature and hence many experts demand it to be amended or abrogated.

The following argument supports its abrogation:

  • Article 35A was added to the Constitution by a Presidential order and hence has not been followed the procedure under Art 368. It ultra vires the basic structure and violates the Constitutional procedures established by law as Article 370 (special privileges to J&K) does not anywhere confer on the President legislative or executive powers so vast that he can amend the Constitution or alone perform the function of Parliament.
  • It facilitates the violation of the right of women to ‘marry a man of their choice’ by not giving the heirs any right to property, if the woman marries a man not holding Permanent Resident Certificate (PRC).
  • The industrial sector & whole private sector suffers due to the property ownership restrictions. Good doctors don’t come to the state for the same reason.
  • It gives a free hand to the state government and politicians to discriminate between citizens of India, on an unfair basis and give preferential treatment to some by trampling over others, since the non-residents of the state are debarred from buying properties, getting a government job or voting in the local elections.
  • It ruins the status of West Pakistani refugees. Being citizens of India they are not stateless persons, but being non-permanent residents of Jammu and Kashmir, they cannot enjoy the basic rights and privileges as being enjoyed by permanent residents of Jammu and Kashmir.
  • The Valmikis who were brought to the state during 1957 were given Permanent Resident Certificates on the condition that they and their future generations could stay in the state only if they continued to be safai-karmacharis (scavengers). And even after six decades of service in the state, their children are safai-karmacharis and they have been denied the right to quit scavenging and choose any other profession.
  • In nut and shell we can say that the provisions of Article 35A violates Right to equality under Article 14, 15, 16, 17 and 18; right to reside anywhere in India Article 19; right to live with dignity Article 21; Right to vote Article 326 and many of the rights conferred under Directive Principles of State Policies particularly related to women and children.

However, many expert calls this move raised with ‘communal minded majoritarian’ intentions and support the existing of Article 35A on the following grounds:

  • It protects demographic status of the state in its prescribed constitutional form by not allowing any outsiders to own any property.
  • The Article does not only recognizes the special protection granted to the state of J&K in terms of constitutional, legislative, executive orders but also clarifies and validates their existing provisions and hence this Article, on its own, does not give anything new to the State.
  • The rebate given to the state of J&K in instrument of accession and subsequently added to the constitution of India in the form of Article 370. This Article 35A is a clarificatory provision draws its rights from Article 370 and strengthens the provision of Article 370 without bringing anything new in demand.

Conclusion:

  • However, the recent debate fuels the already ongoing unrest in the valley. Any temptation will further lead to violent unrest and bloodshed in the region. The separatist will get opportunity to divide the opinion of the masses causing uncontrolled situation if anything done on this sensitive issue.
  • The government however needs to deal with promptness and utmost vigour to balance the situation by dialogues, campaigns and debates by involving leaders, stakeholders & state citizens and convincing them about the post benefits of bringing changes. The debate over the larger interest is the need of the hour which also includes the provisions of Article 370.
  • If Jammu and Kashmir is the integral part of India, it should not posses discriminatory provisions with other residents of the country and should adhere the constitutional provisions as a Union of India and not for the small state. The time demands the dynamism in law to do away with the flaws and the citizens of J&K should be the active part of it without having any vested interests.
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Alkapoddar
Alkapoddar
5 years ago

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Pritam Kumar
5 years ago
Reply to  Alkapoddar

Hi Alka,
-Nice word you have used in intro…’Carte Blanche’…good
-Introduction should also talk about its introduction through presidential order…and challenge of constitutionality…
-She would be restricted from her property right….also mention how it violates her fundamental rights…and also how it is discriminatory for Indian citizens (the very next point)…
-More points needed for support of article as well as against the article…you have mentioned very few points…
-Conclusion seems to be okay…

Overall, average attempt…adding some more points may improve the quality of this answer…
Nice approach…keep writing…
Marks awarded: 4.5/10

Priya
Priya
5 years ago

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Pritam Kumar
5 years ago
Reply to  Priya

Hi Priya,
-Introduction is okay…
-Points are very good and nicely presented…
-However, conclusion could have been much better…some unique idea is required here…Your conclusion is maintaining the status quo…Though OKAY…
Overall very good answer…nice approach…well done….keep it up…
Keep writing…
Marks awarded: 6/10

Kapiushon
Kapiushon
5 years ago

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Pritam Kumar
5 years ago
Reply to  Kapiushon

Hi Kapiushon,
-Introduction is okay…though more clarity can be brought by arranging the ideas here…(with points what you have mentioned)
-show the relevancy of point 2 (of 1st page) with the context of question…explain further…
-Points for the existence of this article…are too general…bring points like maintaining demographic status, maintaining their unique culture etc..etc…
Conclusion is okay…okay…

Overall good attempt…few improvement will improve the quality of answer…keep practicing…
Marks awarded: 4.5/10

Akshat Sikri
Akshat Sikri
5 years ago

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Pritam Kumar
5 years ago
Reply to  Akshat Sikri

Hi Akshat Sikri,
-Very poor introduction…why to furnish extra info which are not relevant in the context of question…
-points under discriminatory…are too general and are not having any example…like article 19, for job article 15, 16 etc…discriminatory towards marrying women article 21, 19 etc…
your points are just introduction….i mean to say that “You are saying there is something in some particular box” but you are abstaining yourself from recognizing what exactly in the box…we need to explain the exact fact rather saying any concrete solution….
-Nothing concrete in conclusion as well…mention what should be amended…what need to be deleted and what to be kept…

Overall an average answer….keep practicing.. will improve for sure…
Keep writing…
Marks awarded: 3/10

BAZZI
BAZZI
5 years ago

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Sir, I am not able to maintain word limit, please provide me suggestion regarding the same, i.e where I can make a cut in above answer to make it within 150 words. If possible, please provide me a sample answer under the prescribed word limit. I wrote this answer twice – 1st attempt – crossed 300 words and the one I posted here is my 2nd attempt but still crossed 200 words !!

Pritam Kumar
5 years ago
Reply to  BAZZI

Hi BAZZI,
The problem of maintaining the word limit is universal and faced by everyone…the universal problem is that we all face is of two types…either we don’t have points to write or we have plenty of points to write…your approach is good that you tried to sync the points from the first attempt to reduced words in 2nd attempt…
-You should not be worry much right now about it…It happens with practice…and you will be able to articulate the ideas and points in very few words…This all dependence on practice…keep writing…
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-Nice introduction…
-Under why it be abolished…point 1 is incomplete…Point 1 and 2 need explanation…
-In Conclusion last line…it should be constitutional process rather political…the rest is okay…

-Overall, nice attempt…well written ideas….Keep it up…keep writing…
Marks awarded: 5/10

Invincible
Invincible
5 years ago

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Pritam Kumar
5 years ago
Reply to  Invincible

Hi Invinvible,
-Good Introduction….
-In the first point…how it is against the spirit of Indian value and unity…? need to substantiate…
-Point 2…How it is discriminatory…?
-Point 3…How? justification needed…
-very nice ideas in 2nd page….and well written…
-Conclusion is absent…

Overall nice approach…few improvement…will make this answer excellent…keep practicing….
-Marks awarded: 3.5/10

Imgroot
Imgroot
5 years ago

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Pritam Kumar
5 years ago
Reply to  Imgroot

Hello Imgroot,
-Introduction is okay…
-Your logic provided for not abolishing the Article is not as strong as you have raised the question of violation of several fundamental rights…You have not addressed how to protect the violation of such rights…
-Any amendment in the law which is/are being implemented in J&K should must secure the majority support of J&K Legislature…afterall they are the representatives of people…so the demand should arise in legislature and not among people or few section of people…
-Further, you also need to mention that it also hinders the economic growth of the state and hence nation as no oursider corporates are allowed to own properties.
-Ideas initiated first should be completed first…or before beginning with new ideas…
Oveall good answer need to bring more strong evidence in support of your points….
Nice approach…
Keep writing…
Marks awarded: 3.5/10

anita raul
anita raul
5 years ago

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Pritam Kumar
5 years ago
Reply to  anita raul

Hi Anita,
-Poor Introduction….no framework for answer…points are randomly mentioned without arrangement of ideas…Ideas are incomplete in your points…
Poor presentation…How it makes India one? Irrelevant points shows you lack conceptual clarity…read with deep sincerity and bring concrete points with evidence….points mentioned by you are vague…
-Read our model answer or other best answers reviewed and follow the pattern of writing…
Keep writing…

anita raul
anita raul
5 years ago
Reply to  Pritam Kumar

okay sir thank u . i will improve that .

prafull sharma
5 years ago

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Pritam Kumar
5 years ago
Reply to  prafull sharma

Hi Prafull,
-The Article is added by president…by using the power conferred u/a 370 (1) of Indian Constitution…
Rather mentioning restriction…mention that this article facilitate or protects the rights of people of J&K.
-Ideas in Introduction is okay…though presentation could have been much better…
-Avoid repetition of ideas…first point under argument in favour…is talking about the same idea as what mentioned in intro…
-This Article prevents person from outside of the state to buy and posses property…Also mention about the violation of rights under constitution…14, 15, 21 etc…
-You have not taken any stand under conclusion…This is a simple case…and you are free to take stand even if the case is in court….Your stand is not going to affect the decision of court…
-We can mention that….Jammu and Kashmir is very much integral part of India, and hence it should not posses discriminatory provisions with other residents of the country and should adhere the constitutional provisions as a Union of India and not for the small state….

Overall, Its okay….Could have made the answer much better in quality…
Nice attempt…Keep writing…perfectness will come with practice…
Marks awarded: 4/10

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