Mentor’s comment-

• In the introduction, briefly state the how both the Indian and the U.S. Constitution provides for fundamental rights.
• In the body discuss the difference in the approach like absolute rights of the U.S. and conditional rights in the India. Next mention how removal of right to property, 9th Schedule makes, Article 31A, 31B, 31C etc. makes Indian guarantee of fundamental rights under Indian Constitution different. 
• Conclude by mentioning the context which necessitated some changes in India’s approach to fundamental right.