Mentor’s Comments-
- In the first part, discuss about coral reefs, its features, conditions for its survival.
- Next, elaborate the impact of global warming on coral systems and it’s survival.
- Support with examples.
- Conclude with a way forward.
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Mentor’s Comments-
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Muskan,
Good attempt.
Introduction is good and related to present context.
Demand of the question is not properly met.
Elaborate how global warming affects the conditions which are required for the survival of corals.
Conditions for survival of corals include clear and clean water, moderately warm water, presence of sunlight. Then try to relate how global warming is affecting these necessary factors.
Conclusion is good.
Keep writing.
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Sehaj,
Very nice attempt.
You have answered the requirement of the question.
Structuring and presentation is also good.
Conditions for survival of corals include clear and clean water, moderately warm water, presence of sunlight. Then try to relate how global warming is affecting these necessary factors.
Conclusion is good.
Keep writing.
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Gamer,
Very good answer.
You have good knowledge of the topic.
You have covered all the major dimensions which makes the answer holistic.
Structure is also good.
Overall good answer.
Keep writing.