Hello

Decent attempt.
Introduction is fine, however no need to quote the scholar.
You can make a table for showing the differences, that will improve the presentation.
While talking about ideology, you can mention the impact of western liberal
thought, moderate politics and European History on moderates whereas impact of Indian history, cultural heritage and traditional symbols on the extremists. Other points are fine.
In methods, violent revolution is too strong a word…better you can use militant methods and direct political action approach of extremists; while talking about moderates’ methods it could be elaborated a bit- 2 step process- creating a strong public opinion and persuading the British.
Rest of the answer is fine.
Overall decent attempt.
Keep practicing. 🙂

4.5/10