Q.1 Legal measures alone are not sufficient for addressing the issue of domestic violence against women, rather it requires intervention at societal level. Discuss. (10 Marks)
Mentor’s Comments-
Discuss the issue of domestic violence against women in India.
Mention the legal measures in this context.
Comment on the need for intervention at the societal level.
Decent attempt.
Content is good, presentation is also fine.
Good that you have mentioned data in intro, you can also briefly explain domestic violence after that.
Legal measures are well-written, dowry prohibition act can be mentioned.
Next part is fine, you can also talk about issues like marital rape(still not illegal in India). Also, non-reportage of crimes against women due to family pressure etc and the lackadaisical attitude of authorities can be mentioned.
Conclusion is okay, but better if you can end with a way forward.
Keep practicing. 🙂
You should start by writing an introduction, you can either define domestic violence or mention some facts and figures associated with.
Legal measures part is well written. Dowry prohibition act can be mentioned.
After that mention some causes(specially societal) for domestic violence, elaborate on the points you have mentioned. This part should be the crux of your answer.
You can also talk about issues like marital rape(still not illegal in India); non-reportage of crimes against women due to family pressure etc and the lackadaisical attitude of authorities.
Keep way forward short, you have mentioned a broad way forward which is not limited to domestic violence but overall women empowerment. Although points are good but writing so much is not required.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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Karun
Decent attempt.
Content is good, presentation is also fine.
Good that you have mentioned data in intro, you can also briefly explain domestic violence after that.
Legal measures are well-written, dowry prohibition act can be mentioned.
Next part is fine, you can also talk about issues like marital rape(still not illegal in India). Also, non-reportage of crimes against women due to family pressure etc and the lackadaisical attitude of authorities can be mentioned.
Conclusion is okay, but better if you can end with a way forward.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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Javed
You should start by writing an introduction, you can either define domestic violence or mention some facts and figures associated with.
Legal measures part is well written. Dowry prohibition act can be mentioned.
After that mention some causes(specially societal) for domestic violence, elaborate on the points you have mentioned. This part should be the crux of your answer.
You can also talk about issues like marital rape(still not illegal in India); non-reportage of crimes against women due to family pressure etc and the lackadaisical attitude of authorities.
Keep way forward short, you have mentioned a broad way forward which is not limited to domestic violence but overall women empowerment. Although points are good but writing so much is not required.
Keep practicing. 🙂
3.5/10