Mentor’s Comments-
- Explain globalisation in introduction.
- In the body, discuss it’s effect and it’s significance.
- Discuss core of cultural diversity in India.Also mention, how globalisation has influenced the core of cultural diversity.
- Discuss some negative impacts as well.
- Conclude suitably.
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Muskan,
Very good attempt.
You have answered all the parts well.
Structure of the answer is also good.
You can add other dimensions as well like movies, music, sports, cuisine.
How globalisation has affected the taste of Indians towards music movies cuisine dressing.
These will add more diversity.
Conclusion is good.
Keep writing.