Mentor’s Comments-
- In introduction, briefly discuss what you understand by communalism.
- In the body, discuss the reasons contributing to Communalism; vested political interests, rise of communal organisations, politicization of local problems, religious fundamentalism etc.
- Discuss the impact of communalism on Indian society; impact on social fabric, economy, polity etc.
- Suggest way forward for eradicating communalism.
- Conclude that Public awareness needs to be raised about the harmful impact of communalism. Our constitution, which labels India as a secular nation makes provisions to protect the interests of all religions and goes beyond the code of any religion. Hence one must learn to put national interests above one’s religious views.
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Introduction is fine. In reasons, religious fundamentalism has been repeated 3-4 times, avoid that..mention it once..mention other factors too..like rise of communal organisations(you can give examples rather than mentioning rise of Hindutva and rise of Islamists); also political opportunism can be mentioned..vote bank politics is also one of the major causes. Politicians use the economic deprivation of communities by stoking hatred for other communities among them..make your answer more diverse.
Impacts mentioned are fine.
Try to mention a brief way forward, in conclusion you can invoke the preamble and constitution which vouch for a secular country.
Decent attempt but you need to work a bit upon the content.
Keep writing. 🙂