Mentor’s Comments-
- Introduction: describe the office of the Speaker of Lok Sabha in short.
- Issue: Recently, the Speaker’s role has become a reason for conflict between the opposition and ruling parties for alleged partisanship.
- Role of the Speaker: Explain how Speaker plays a crucial role in issues such as money bill, maintaining the decorum in assembly, passing of critical motions like censure motion and no-confidence motion etc
- Problems with the current system: Explain how the current system of appointing the Speaker from the ruling party without any procedure is hampering its role and leads to the subjective interpretation of issues rather than objectivity needed in a parliamentary democracy.
- In conclusion, suggestions should be made, about how this post can be made more impartial along-with the benefits of doing so.
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Aarti
Nice attempt.
Introduction is good, nice that you have linked it to current affairs.
Some other examples can also be mentioned for example passing bills through voice vote in case of farm bills, deciding on money bills for example Aadhar.
Role of speaker in India is good, mention can also be made of UK system where the speaker has to resign from the party to maintain impartiality.
Subheading of next part should be ‘issues in objectivity’. Points are good.
In way forward try to write some official recommendations for example use 2nd ARC report.
Conclusion is fine.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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Nandhini
Good attempt, intro is fine. Here only you can mention about UK system.
In the end more points can be added in way forward for example recommendations of 2nd ARC, time period for deciding defection cases etc.
In the first part, some points can also be mentioned regarding how in India impartiality is maintained.. Casting of vote in case of tie, constitutional provisions, security of tenure etc
Implications mentioned are good.
Conclusion is fine.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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Muskan
Introduction is good.
Role of speaker in Indian system is also fine. You can also mention some points regarding how in India impartiality is maintained.. Casting of vote in case of tie, constitutional provisions, security of tenure etc
In next part, mention some current events for e.g. case of Arunachal Pradesh, Karnataka etc
Bills being passed through voice vote can also be mentioned.
Delay in deciding defection cases can be mentioned.
Try to mention a brief way forward with recommendations of 2nd ARC, need to have a time period for deciding defection proceedings.
Conclusion is fine, you can make it a bit more balanced.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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