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- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/bulli- bai-latest-example-harassment- women-online-7708633/ - In the intro, mention the recent incident of Bulli Bai app.
- In the body, mention the various ways in which women face harassment and the issue of reluctance to file the case. In the steps mention work being done by CERT-IN and the Cyber Crime Prevention Against Women and Children (CCPWC) scheme. Inthe suggestions mention promo reporting and registration of a case, international cooperation through formal treaties and informal channels and fast trial of cybercrime etc.
- Conclude by mentioning that prompt reporting of cybercrime by citizens, technically proficient investigation by police adequately supported by forensics, and time-bound completion of court trials are essential for catching cyber offenders who are terrorising people, especially women, in the virtual as well as the real world.
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Nandhini
Good attempt.
Introduction is good. You can add 1-2 points regarding harassment of women activists, political representatives, journalists etc
Steps taken are also quite elaborate, mention about role of NCW too, taking suo moto cognisance etc. Other points are good.
In suggestions, you can add need of speedier trials, establishment of fast track courts, use of technology for better forensics, training and sensitisation of existing law enforcement personnel etc
Points regarding raising awareness, better reportage etc are good.
Conclusion is fine.
Keep practicing. You are writing well. 🙂