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- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/c- raja-mohan-writes-a-chill- down-asias-spine-nato- australia-japan-new-zealand- south-korea-8009028/ - In the intro, mention the significant Indo-Pacific presence with the prime ministers of Australia, Japan, and New Zealand as well as the president of South Korea participation in a NATO summit.
- In the intro, mention the tendency in small European countries to balance against Russia by aligning with US. On the similar lines Asian countries relates with the small European countries on that count against the expansive Chines policies. These countries are reacting by creating sophisticated national military capacities, resolving mutual differences and strengthening security cooperation and bolstering alliances with the US.
- Conclude by mention that the egregious expansionism of Russia and China, the strategic integration of the Asian and European geopolitical theatres has now begun.
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Hello
Intro is fine, but no need to mention scholars in GS papers. You can talk about significant Indo-Pacific presence with the prime ministers of Australia, Japan, and New Zealand as well as the president of South Korea participation in the recent NATO summit.
Also, expansionist policies of China and Russia can be mentioned because that is the context of the question.
In the body points are fine, you can mention examples like AUKUS, Quad is good… Point no. V can be avoided because it is Russia and China’s expansionism that is forcing countries to take these steps. Creating sophisticated national military capacities and resolving mutual differences and strengthening security cooperation (example- Japan and South Korea) can also be mentioned.
Conclusion is fine.
Keep practicing. 🙂