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- https://www.thehindu.com/
opinion/op-ed/bringing- eurasia-closer/ article65706597.ece - In the intro, mention the recent launch of the INSTC.
- In the body, mention the financial and geopolitical significance of the corridor for India and the region.
- It can be concluded by mentioning that as a transcontinental multi-modal corridor that aims to bring Eurasia closer together, the INSTC is a laudable initiative in its own right.
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Introduction is fine, but, you can talk about the more recent launch of the INSTC.
Significance is fine, broadly you have covered the points, further you can broadly mention the geopolitical significance from India’s perspective such as change in India’s policy from non-alignment to multi-alignment, one if the reasons for India’s refusal to condemn Russia’s invasion of Ukraine, providing a scope for bypassing Pakistan in trade etc. Other points are good.
Conclusion is fine.
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