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- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/how- startup-ecosystem-can-help- india-become-powerhouse-of- global-economy-7457018/ - In the intro, mention that India is home to more than 40,000 startups and is building a robust tech and internet infrastructure.
- In the body, mention the factors such as high percentage of working age population, internet penetration, the talent pool of skilled workforce, increased expendable income and large capital inflows are fueling the startups in India. Next, mention the potential of the startups such as value creation new business opportunities, innovation, tech-centric approaches and job creation across sectors etc. In challenges mention regulatory environment challenges and need for a skilled workforce.
- Conclude by mentioning the potential of the startup economy to take the country on the path of prosperity.
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Muskan
Introduction is fine. Before mentioning challenges, mention some enabling factors-
high percentage of working age population,
internet penetration,
the talent pool of skilled workforce, increased expendable income and large capital inflows(FDI, angel investors etc).
Challenges mentioned are fine you can add lack of skilled workforce and not up to the mark regulatory environment.
In way forward, also address the ‘how’ part of the question-how can they make India powerhouse- mention the potential of the startups such as value creation, new business opportunities, innovation, tech-centric approaches and job creation across sectors etc.
Rest of the points are fine.
Keep writing. 🙂
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