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- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/what- gdp-data-says-about-economy- 7714993/ - In the intro, mention the FAE.
- In the body mention the factors that could lead to changes in the first advanced estimate. In the next part mention factors such as weak consumption demand, weak recovery in sectors such as construction, trade, hotels, tourism and other contact-based services, which are also labour-intensive. Also mention that investment in dominated by government investment etc. The normalisation of monetary policy in the US and Europe could also pose challenges for India
- Conclude by mentioning that upcoming budget for the next fiscal year will show us how the government intends to create and use the fiscal space.
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Jyoti
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Introduction is good. Next part about factors that might change the estimates are also good.
Points in factors influencing budget priorities are also good.
Nice that you have mentioned data at adequate places.
In last section about budget priorities you can add paying attention bto execution, setting attainable divestment targets and focus on reducing deficits in medium run.
Conclusion is good.
Overall nice attempt, especially content is good. You can improve the presentation a bit by making flowcharts etc to address some parts of the answer.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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