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- https://www.thehindu.com/
opinion/lead/a-white-touch-to- a-refreshed-green-revolution/ article37813445.ece - In the intro, mention the government’s efforts to double the farmers’ income.
- In the body, contrast the purposes of the two revolutions as both shaped the Indian economy and agriculture in different ways. In the next part mention lessons such as inclusion and equity, keeping the social side in mind, ensuring the practical use of science, sustainability etc.
- Conclude by mentioning the essence of democratic economic governance is that an enterprise must be of the people, for the people, and governed by the people too.
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In intro, also mention about green revolution. Further, write a small section to show how the purpose of the green revolution varied from the purpose of the white revolution..you can make a small table showing the differences- green revolution’s target was food security through increasing agricultural produce whereas other was to increase income of farmers; green rev was a more of technological exercise whereas white revolution was socio-economic in nature.
Next part is fine, you have mentioned some good points. Further, can talk about the need to focus on the social development of the agricultural workers involved rather than profits..use of local solutions and resources can also be mentioned.
Write a conclusion..lessons from white revolution is already a way forward.
Keep writing. 🙂
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Shri Ram
Intro is fine. Differences part is also fine however you can explicitly state that one was target for food security whereas other was to increase income of farmers. You can also mention that green rev was a more of technological exercise whereas white revolution was socio-economic in nature.
Points in the next part are good, you can add the importance of focusing on social side more than on profit. Also, top-down ownership of enterprises, whether by the state , or by remote investors can be avoided.
Conclusion is fine.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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Muskan
Intro is good, use of table for differences is also nice. Mention about milk (Amul as an example) and cereals in each one. Other points are good.
Points mentioned in next part are fine, also mention need to focus on social benefit for agricultural workers more than profit, also you can talk about unsustainability of top-down approach whether by state or private players while talking about cooperatives.
Conclusion is good.
Overall answer is nice, try to write more straight.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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Bhanu
Decent attempt, intro is fine. In differences, you can make a table for better presentation..also you can add that green revolution was more of a technological exercise whereas white revolution was socio-economic in nature.
Points about WR are fine, in applications also you have written some good points..further can talk about the need to focus on the social development of the agricultural workers involved rather than profits..use of local solutions and resources can also be mentioned.
Conclusion is fine.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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