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- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/ theres-a-mismatch-between- indias-graduate-aspirations- and-job-availability-7601016/ - In the intro, mention the coal shortage crisis and its impact on the power sector.
- In the body, mention how various ministries played role in the shortage crisis. In the next part suggest the enactment of the Act and the creation of an energy ministry to deal with the issue of energy in a holistic manner rather than in silos.
- Conclude by mentioning that such steps could help avoid the issues faced by the power sector in the future.
Answer
Harsh
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Coming to the answer it is quite good. Very rich in content. Introduction is fine, while writing about factors for coal crisis, you can include some more points to make the answer holistic for example increase in import of coal by China, increase in power demand after Covid pushback, continuous rainfall in coal-bearing areas etc
Measures suggested are fine, you can mention about the need to create an energy ministry to deal with the issue of energy in a holistic manner rather than in silos.
Conclusion is fine.
Keep writing. 🙂
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Siddharth
Well written answer. Introduction is good, content is also fine. You have touched upon many issues. However, you can include some more points to make the answer holistic for example increase in import of coal by China, increase in power demand after Covid pushback, continuous rainfall in coal-bearing areas, issue of idle captive mines etc
Measures mentioned are good, a point about capacity development in renewable sector can be incorporated keeping in mind the evolving discussions.
Conclusion is fine.
Keep writing. 🙂