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- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/net- zero-presents-many- opportunities-for-india-and- challenges/ - In the intro, mention India’s commitment to net-zero emission made at COP26.
- In the body, in opportunities mention better access to technology, funding and market, the country can leapfrog into new green technology, better market access etc. In the challenges mention need for improving the finances of discoms to necessary for scaling up renewables, need to overcome multiple levels of complexity like federalism, fiscal constraints and bureaucracy, high investment needs etc.
- Conclude by mentioning that India is on the right track but needs to redouble its efforts to remove the obstacles.
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Siddharth
Intro is fine; challenges mentioned are also okay, some important points are missing- need for improving the finances of discoms to necessary for scaling up renewables, need to overcome multiple levels of complexity like federalism (centre-state cooperation required), bureaucracy , private investments etc
In opportunities mention impact on India’s economic growth- estimation of 2-2.5 million additional jobs can be created in the renewables sector by 2050; if India’s exports achieve a “green stamp”, they may find better market access (will help in GDP growth). Other points are fine.
Conclusion is fine, need to redouble efforts both on policy and implementation front can be mentioned.
Keep writing. 🙂
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Muskan
Intro is fine but challenges part is very generic; some points are okay for example financial but some are seeming deliberately fitted for example crackers. Mention things like poor finances of discoms (which will act as a hindrance in upgrading power grids), bureaucratic hassles and high investment needs etc
Opportunities part is fine, although some points can be added for example estimation of 2-2.5 million additional jobs can be created in the renewables sector by 2050; if India’s exports achieve a “green stamp”, they may find better market access (will help in GDP growth) etc
Conclusion is good.
Keep writing.
3.5/10