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- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/why- india-needs-a-single-agency- to-guard-its-borders-7735976/ - In the intro, mention the figures about India’s borders with various countries.
- In the body, mention borders with various countries and agencies guarding that border. Next, mention the issue of coordination, increased threat, practice of single agency adopted by the various countries etc to favour the single agency to guard India’s border.
- Conclude by mentioning the need for uniformity in the border guarding forces as India faced renewed challenges from its adversary.
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Hello
In introduction, try to mention some data regarding border areas- shares land border with 6 countries- 15000+ km, long maritime border, about 3500 km LoC with Pak and LAC with China.
This will add value to your answer.
In various border guarding forces, you have mixed up a bit, BSF is fine, in ITBP mention Indo-China. Nepal and Bhutan borders are guarded by SSB.
In need, your points are fine but some repetitive, diversify the answer.
You can mention advances of China, terrorist infiltration by Pak, militarized peace-time scenario etc
Points about lack of technical efficacy, coordination, dual controletc are good.
Give a proper subheading for way forward and mention points there.
Also mention a conclusion.
Your content is fine, however improvement is needed in presentation.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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