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- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/a- partnership-to-carry-india- into-net-zero-future-7706604/ - In the intro, mention India’s commitment to net-zero emission by 2070.
- In the body, mention India’s renewable energy target of 500GW by 2030, accelerating e-mobility targets, Ujjwala Yojana and Ujala schemes. Also, mention initiatives by the corporate sector and industries etc.
- Conclude by mentioning that India’s journey on the low-carbon pathway towards net-zero requires the active participation of all stakeholders.
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Alka
Good attempt.
Introduction is fine, you can mention some data regarding India’s cumulative emissions being the lowest.
Steps taken part is also good. You have covered good number of points, use keywords like Panchamrit, EV 30@30 etc to make the answer more impressive.
Good that you have mentioned some data regarding schemes.
Contribution of private sector is also well written, focus on green investments can be mentioned.
A brief way forward can be written before concluding.
Write some of the sections in flowchart format to make the answers more comprehensive.
Conclusion is good.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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Abhishek
Nice attempt. Introduction is good. Next part about steps taken is also fine. Panchamrit part is well explained.
Mention some data in schemes which show their progress. EV 30@30 and PLI schemes related to automotives can also be mentioned.
In contribution of private sector, mention few initiatives, green investments, example of cement industry etc
Use flowcharts to cover various dimensions if you have more content.
Try to mention a brief way forward.
Conclusion is fine.
Keep writing. 🙂