Mentor’s Comments-
- Begin by giving a definition of Integrity.
- In the body, write about the various dimensions of Integrity and mention how it is important to uphold the value for the purpose of the value in itself as promoting truth and not as an aspect of one’s belief with few examples.
- Summarize by highlighting the aspects stressed in body of the answer and conclude Integrity as a core aspect of truth.
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Deepti
Decent attempt, but again you should try to wrap your answer inside 2 pages.
Introduction is good, your understanding of the topic is good too.
Examples mentioned are fine.
However, one aspect is missing- you have almost framed the answer assuming that beliefs can be wrong and justified that integrity is about right beliefs. However, a person with right set of beliefs can lack integrity too.. integrity is acting according to the right beliefs, being honest to yourself even when no one is watching…for example, a person might believe that respecting national anthem is important but does not stand up to the anthem when no one is watching..that is lack of integrity too.
Integrity means being true to who you are, what you say, and what you believe and doing so even when no one is around to see. Other aspects of your answer are fine, just make it crisp.
Conclusion is good.
Keep practicing. 🙂
4.5/10
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Pranav
Introduction is good.
Aspects of integrity part is fine but you can make a flowchart for that. Point no.1 can be improved..’never’ talking about things someone doesn’t know isn’t always good.
Next, you also need to talk a bit about how belief can be right/wrong…plus even if belief is right, integrity is going one step ahead of it..it is about acting according to the right beliefs, being honest to yourself even when no one is watching…for example, a person might believe that respecting national anthem is important but does not stand up to the anthem when no one is watching..that is lack of integrity too.
Try to use some more examples for clarity.
Conclusion is good.
Keep practicing. 🙂
3.5/10